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szaleniec1000

Deserving Chapter 52

Jul 09, 2011 22:54

Whoever added Deserving to Worse Than It Sounds is made of win:

Deserving: an unflinching exploration of non-traditional relationship dynamics and families and the psychological cost of revenge. Famous for its many quotable lines.

Without further ado, the long-awaited Chapter 52.

( NSFW )

centaur buggery, rutting deer symbolism, all your base are belong to us, bad sex, alabaster bottom, badfic:deserving, the anvil symbolises heavy-handedness, pov!fail, sexism, hogwarts roboticised, centaur of gor, mary sue and gary stu, recursive translation theatre, ministrations, delicious appendage, credit where it's due, single is a douche, you fail paediatrics forever, epithet overload, harry potter, sweet relief, said bookism, dada, lube, continuity isn't optional

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szaleniec1000 July 14 2011, 20:03:17 UTC

Well, they can endure long enough to carry messages across the country. I guess if you apply Rule 34 to that, you get this.

Harry Potter Kitteh is adorable.

Isn't he just. :)

tony_branston August 12 2011, 01:58:03 UTC

I just went to AFF dot net and I find it mildly amusing how the description cuts off into the warnings.

szaleniec1000 August 14 2011, 09:41:53 UTC

The problem is most of Abuse, Anal, BDSM, Humil, M/M, MPreg, N/C, Oral, Slave, Spank, WIP

The problem is abuse. Abuse and anal. The two problems are abuse, anal and BDSM. The three problems are abuse, anal and BDSM. And humiliation. The four, no, amongst the problems are such diverse elements as abuse, anal... I'll come in again.

If you're interested, here's the untruncated version from another site:

The problem is most of these Guides are wizards and witches who have lost love ones in the years of battle against the deranged wizard. As in the case of one Harry James Potter who cannot see Severus Snape go free after having killed his parents, godfather, and mentor. Severus Snape agrees. Snarry! [No shit, Sherlock.] This story is nothing like my other two. [Uh, yes it is. They're all Snarry mpreg with contrived clusterfuck plots too.] Harry will be way out of character. [As will everyone else.] You have been warned. [That doesn't begin to warn readers about what's in this fic.]