The whole virginity thing really bugs me D: if it weren't for your sorking I would have given up the moment I read that for the first time. Horribly sexist, that. The way he degraded Hermione to a helpless damsel instead of her strong canon self as well. But, really, the way she plans to have sex with him here reads indeed like a cheap porno story. First you have an almost rape, hero rescues woman, then woman repays him with sex. Read that a million times in erotic fiction.
"I'm not even going into how deeply wrong the idea of a teacher hooking up with his 15-year-old student is, because quite frankly I shouldn't need to."
Tell that to the Neil fan(who might possibly be Neil) defending this load of tripe on the Hogwarts Exposed TVTropes page...
The thought crossed my mind that they might be Neil, especially after seeing a word usage error I now heavily associate with him in one of their edits, but on further investigation they really don't seem to be. Might be one of his friends though.
Possibly. I ought to write a spitefic for this series in which you, me, and Zelda Queen like, I dunno, capture Neil and bring him to the HMS STFU for trial or something...
HG131, aka Neilfan? Man, all those arguments we had... ugh, that was annoying. But it really reached breaking point when he insulted the collaboration sporking and his petty attacks on America that were completely off-topic.
Well, he's gone for now. Banned by a mod or something for causing trouble.
"It's interesting that the author has Harry playing Quidditch for Wales rather than England"
To be fair, Harry is Welsh in canon, as it's highly implied that Godric's Hollow lies in Wales. Hagrid passed over Bristol on his way to Surrey on Sirius' motorcycle, so the only logical place he could've been coming from was Wales.
Jamie noticed that Amanda was "noticeably shivering". ORLY?
I don't know if I noticed it to the same degree the first time I read this, but Jamie's Sue-ness is absolutely infuriating. She's far worse than Enoby Way, who at least is hilarious. Jamie just makes me want to headbutt something sharp.
Jamie noticed that Amanda was "noticeably shivering". ORLY?
I think there's actually a few instances of characters in Hogwarts Exposed noticing something we're told they'd not noticed, like they've just failed a spot check or something. Blame the author's woeful handling of continuity and viewpoint, which gets worse. As does the redundancy. In fact, "it gets worse" is the overriding theme of Hogwarts Exposed.
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But, really, the way she plans to have sex with him here reads indeed like a cheap porno story. First you have an almost rape, hero rescues woman, then woman repays him with sex. Read that a million times in erotic fiction.
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Please, are you gonna think Neil's gonna add any, y'know, CONSISTENT CONTINUITY to this fanfic?!
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Tell that to the Neil fan(who might possibly be Neil) defending this load of tripe on the Hogwarts Exposed TVTropes page...
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XD That would be so wrong...
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Well, he's gone for now. Banned by a mod or something for causing trouble.
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To be fair, Harry is Welsh in canon, as it's highly implied that Godric's Hollow lies in Wales. Hagrid passed over Bristol on his way to Surrey on Sirius' motorcycle, so the only logical place he could've been coming from was Wales.
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I don't know if I noticed it to the same degree the first time I read this, but Jamie's Sue-ness is absolutely infuriating. She's far worse than Enoby Way, who at least is hilarious. Jamie just makes me want to headbutt something sharp.
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Jamie noticed that Amanda was "noticeably shivering". ORLY?
I think there's actually a few instances of characters in Hogwarts Exposed noticing something we're told they'd not noticed, like they've just failed a spot check or something. Blame the author's woeful handling of continuity and viewpoint, which gets worse. As does the redundancy. In fact, "it gets worse" is the overriding theme of Hogwarts Exposed.
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