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szaleniec1000

Deserving Chapter 44

Jan 15, 2011 01:02

The story so far: Severus has given birth to Harry's daughter with the aid of a Gorean centaur. I've said it before and I'll say it again: Deserving means never having to say you're bullshitting. If TVTropes still had the I Am Not Making This Up section, the entire fic could have gone in there.

( Deserving Chapter 44 (NSFW) )

epic fail, centaur buggery, please form an orderly queue, ivory seed, alabaster bottom, a sure sign of a diseased mind, expospeak, badfic:deserving, little snakes, the anvil symbolises heavy-handedness, centaur of gor, literal butthurt, rectuuum!, americanisms in the potterverse, mary sue and gary stu, allcaps of doom, how is babby formed, ruler, celebrian wants her buttplug back, you fail paediatrics forever, incantations do not work that way, harry potter, brain bleach, viagra, dada

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tenkai_kujaku January 15 2011, 20:30:31 UTC

Can't wait for the next dreaded chapter...it just keeps getting worse, doesn't it?

*sends you some good beer to keep the sporking juices going*

fly_buggy_fly January 16 2011, 03:46:44 UTC

You know, I'm still trying to figure out the title of this monstrosity -- Who deserves what?

(I am all about titles being symbolic, meaningful, describing the story, etc...)

szaleniec1000 January 16 2011, 04:17:26 UTC

There are a lot of passages where Severus navel-gazes about how he deserves everything that's happening to him. I redacted most of them because once I sporked one, I'd sporked them all.

meicdon13 January 18 2011, 00:20:45 UTC

Wouldn't the butt plug be hidden from view by the centuar's tail? (This thing is the only thing that registered in my mind because everything else just makes it hurt)

szaleniec1000 January 18 2011, 00:33:10 UTC

This hadn't occurred to me, but now you mention it that's a good point. That, and apparently Deservingverse centaurs run around staring at each other's arses all day.