Comments | szaleniec1000: Deserving Chapters 42-43

szaleniec1000

Deserving Chapters 42-43

Jan 13, 2011 22:26

Welcome back to Deserving. Chapters 42 and 43 follow directly on from each other, so here they are as a double bill.

( Deserving Chapters 42-43 (NSFW) )

shag like a pirate, please form an orderly queue, what do you mean it's not awesome, train wreck, aaaaaaaaaaaaa!, bad sex, conflict be damned, department of redundancy department, badfic:deserving, little snakes, the anvil symbolises heavy-handedness, fucking self-awareness how does it work, centaur of gor, rectuuum!, americanisms in the potterverse, the lowercase wizarding world, mary sue and gary stu, allcaps of doom, how is babby formed, ministrations, milking the giant cow, you fail paediatrics forever, single is a douche, convention of the psychics, epithet overload, harry potter, viagra, dada

Comments 8

meicdon13 January 14 2011, 00:19:40 UTC

I'm kind of saddened by the fact that when they say 'my little snakes,' I keep thinking that instead of a normal dic, Snape's got multiple snakes between his legs.

szaleniec1000 January 15 2011, 00:45:54 UTC

I'm sure that fic exists somewhere. D:

eaglevision1999 January 14 2011, 21:28:22 UTC

Y'know, I'm quite happy I missed your link yesterday. It kind of gave my brain time to heal, because it's not getting better (and I haven't even been on weeping cock and Topless Robot today...)
I'm kind of confused by the way..are their monsters Mary/Gary Stus Sues children already three? Oh my

szaleniec1000 January 15 2011, 00:46:56 UTC

Nicky is three and Richard is two. The timelines really don't add up if you look at all the "three months went by" she throws around so casually.

kanelives February 25 2012, 03:08:42 UTC

I might just have Manics on the brain, but it's just struck me that Harry's and Kingsley's children are named Richard and Nicolas (as in Richey and Nicky) respectively. Sort of Unfortunate Implications given the way those two played up the Ho-Yay in the band's earlier days...

szaleniec1000 February 25 2012, 14:52:50 UTC

I'd have no problem with those two hooking up when they're of age, though the Westermarck effect makes it a bit implausible. On the other hand, foreshadowing a romantic relationship when they're both still toddlers (as the author has done, intentionally or otherwise) is a bit too close to Hogwarts Exposed territory for my liking.

I wonder if the name business was an intentional reference.

ext_1490475 November 12 2012, 10:16:41 UTC

“’Arry, there are only two caves in the forest. One belongs to Aragon’s family and the other to the Centaurs,” said Hagrid who had joined them when he noticed the commotion in the forest.
Why did I read this as "Aragorn's family"?

szaleniec1000 November 12 2012, 14:15:27 UTC

Well, a Lord of the Rings crossover isn't going to make this fic any more silly than it already is.