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( Spam for Kay )

[Apparently the comm has been violently thrown against a wall because when it accidentally flicks on, the feed displays only the ceiling of CLU's cabin--black and smooth, cut with the solitary stripe of a circuit.

There's no words spoken or sign of him in the frame; the only sound that can be heard is the intermittent crack and crash and shatter of ( Read more... )

[Well hello Barge. It's CLU! Except not really. The smile on his face is genuinely friendly, and he's decked out in a white program suit that's lined with a complex pattern of yellow circuitry.

His manner of speech is also noticeably more stilted and wooden than his counterpart's.]

Hello there fellow programs. It appears I have been recently ( Read more... )

[Private to Chromie, audio]

I was told by Agent K that you found it acceptable for me to start work in the library.  I'd like to know more about the specifics--what are my duties and what is my schedule?

[Private to Kay, text]

I've nearly completed the design for a game.

[Then there's a short delay and a blinking cursor, because that little tidbit wasn ( Read more... )

[A quick examination of the network suggests that not only has the Barge been restored to its relative 'normal' state from all the malfunctions and deterioration, but that he's been out for a little more than week.

There had also been a previous (and deceptive) lull in the chaos immediately after the Paris port, and so CLU figures a more solid ( Read more... )

[Public:]
[The video turns on to a mostly dark room, punctuated by lines of soft light that illuminate the edges and curves of the walls. The communicator has been propped up, like CLU had been ready to speak once the feed switched on. But instead, he sits almost motionless within the frame. His elbow is propped against the polished surface of his ( Read more... )

[When the video switches on CLU appears calm, faintly amused--and maybe even a bit pleased that a flood hadn't hit him for once. But at the same time, he'd been subjected to much more personal (and intimate) information about the Users here than he'd really needed.

Even if it all had been somewhat insightful.]

Well, then. The past few days have been ( Read more... )

[Public Filter]
I don't [This is quickly backspaced, then replaced with:]

Request:

Define:Inmate status parameters.

What typical characteristics cause one to be chosen for Inmate status? How is the choice differentiated for those selected to be Wardens?

[Inmate Filter]
Those that are aware of the perceived deficiency or failure that led to your placement ( Read more... )

[It's a few hours after CLU had woken up--enraged, dazed, and in pain all over--in the infirmary. He'd attempted to leave earlier, once he'd awakened and found himself here, but the dizziness and general malaise that plagued him had put an abrupt halt to that.

His voice as he speaks, now, is low and incredibly angry--nearly a growl.]

These ( Read more... )