Fragile 4/5

[sweetballads]

Title: Fragile
Pairing: Changmin x Yoochun
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: When I close my eyes, they are mine.
Genre: AU, angst, drama, romance
Length: Chaptered
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, rape, incest, underage sex, twisted parentship.

Summary: ‘I love you’ soon becomes a meaningless phrase for Yoochun. His mother takes him more and more often to those

Comments

[gompi]

WAHWAHWAH! i've been dying for this update ;3;3;3;

For a moment, his mind is finally filled with nothing but warmth and safety. The strong arms of Changmin are wrapped securely around him, protecting him from the dark shadows from outside, the sweet smell of the man putting his mind to ease while the sound of his steady and strong heartbeat is like a lullaby. A blissful sleep is soon welcoming him.

When Yoochun wakes up the next day and notices that Changmin has fallen off the couch, he isn’t surprised at all. He tries so hard to suppress his laughter when he wakes his brother up but can’t when he sees the confused look in Changmin’s eyes.

i'm begging you to update fast!! i just... i'm dying ;3;

[sweetballads]

:DDDD

I just noticed I totally screwed this update up loool ><;; There were quite some mistakes with the codes (idek, I blame my shaky hands for screwing up those html codes!) and I actually posted a shorter part than I had originally intended ^^;;

So LOL I think you could call it a fast update? I've changed it now, there's more story below the last part you've read.

[gompi]

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH THE ENDING!! Changmin you are too sweet!

oh man, i feel so hard for Jae ;3; and poor Chun!

[sweetballads]

:DD I'm really glad you liked it!

[leelamii]

Are you sure five chapters will be enough? ;>

[sweetballads]

HAHAHAHA, I don't know!

I feel bad, I wanted to become your hero. :c XD

[leelamii]

YOU FAILED! SO BADLY! (fail some more?) :"D And fail has never been so wonderful before. ;3

[sweetballads]

-cries because of her fail-

I was really really intending to finish it with this chapter! But it got longer and longer and longer and then I was like: OHGOD, I STILL HAVE THIS WHOLE SHIZ PLANNED OUT NO WAY I CAN CRAM THIS INTO ONE CHAPTER. D:

and thus, I failed in becoming your hero ;-;

and thus, I'm sad. :C

On a sidenote, I completely forgot to reply to your comment in the last chapter! God, I'm lazy...

[bakamitsukichan]

OH my GOD: omg~omg~omg~omg~omg~omg~omg~omg....

I can't think about anything else to say but OMfG!!

Bravo! You write do damn well! I could feel the emotions in me while reading...

I liked the text. So freakin'much. But the story's kind of killing me from inside. é.è"

Please update as soon as you can!!<3

I love Changmin so much right now !!! T-T I want him as a big bro T-T (.. but, well, y'know... not under these conditions... I would never ever wish this kind of childhood enven to some worstest enemies!)

[sweetballads]

:DDDD I'm so glad you liked it!! Really, your comment makes me smile. <3

I know, Changmin is just totally adorable! But I wouldn't want him as a brother.

I mean. That guy is just so desirable. I'd think naughty things about my own brother rofl XD;; And yeah, a childhood like Yoochun's is just... idek, so bad. D:

[crimson_miharu]

I've missed this story! So many emotions in this chapter...I love the creative way that Min came up with to ease the tension and awkwardness between he and Yoochun when it was time for Chun to bathe, it made me laugh.

I loved the ending of this chapter, Chun deserves to have peace and happiness after all he has been through and hopefully Min will be able to facilitate that for him!

[sweetballads]

:D I'm glad you liked it! And that, even through all the angst, you were still able to laugh at some points haha. XD This is quite a heavy and dark story so yeah ...

Thank you for reading :D (like seriously, how many fics do you actually read? I always see your comments everywhere rofl XD)

[crimson_miharu]

LOL! I read too many to keep track from Big Bang to SuJu and obviously DBSK....if it's good I will read it :D

[sweetballads]

Haha, you know, I'm quite a picky fanfic reader so if the desciption is meh, I just won't read it unless I love the writer. But I've seen your name sooo many times when I scroll to the comments section, it's so incredible XD

Aahh, Suju <3 I love them but the pairings (except for a few) are just so mwah. Maybe because there are like 15 x 15 (or more in case of threesomes, foursomes, etc) choices roflmao XD Eunhae, Hanchul and Kyu/Yewook are just too precious though ;-; I never really bothered, not even with SHINee (who actually is my bias group). I guess it's because DBSK fanfics brought me into the fanfic world lol XD

[vaguelynormal]

mineminemine

poor yoochun, sometimes i forget how old/young he is >.<' changmin is so nice though but i think they both need therapy XD

[sweetballads]

XD True words. Ah well, did you expect them to grow up normally with these kinds of parents rofl? XD