Fragile 4/5

[sweetballads]

Title: Fragile
Pairing: Changmin x Yoochun
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: When I close my eyes, they are mine.
Genre: AU, angst, drama, romance
Length: Chaptered
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, rape, incest, underage sex, twisted parentship.

Summary: ‘I love you’ soon becomes a meaningless phrase for Yoochun. His mother takes him more and more often to those

Comments

[sweetballads]

Hahaha, I know, Changmin is a total sweetheart. <3

Trololol, you'll discover who the third party is in the next chapter. :3

[abcdefghiluvyou]

i was waiting for an update on this :)
thank you for the new and loooong chapter <3

poor yoochun. he must be so confused. but i am
really happy that changmin is so nice in this one
...i was kind of expecting him to be cold and uncaring
but was pleasantly surprised by his caring and warm
personality. its better this way- another cruel person
possibly would have broken chunnie's little heart in two :/

update soon :)))

[sweetballads]

To be honest, my first intention was to make him like that as well. XD But yeah, it turned out quite differently. I just thought Yoochun couldn't have another cruel person in his life :/ It'd've been too much to handle for such a little boy.

I just couldn't break him even more.

But I'm really happy you like this story :D I'll try to update soon but idk when that'll be. 2,5 major stress weeks are coming up lol XD

[harunotenshi]

this was such a looooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggg chapter... wow... i'll be frank with you. some of the parts here are a bit dragging and redundant. you have to be careful of that. also you have grammatical errors scattered here and there but nothing major...

but this was just long. wow... so much pain and hurt and just...yoochun is so broken i'm crying for him... changmin understands the most but i guess he's having a hard time trying to express his feelings, especially with yoochun just putting his guard up once he'd finally found out the truth and realized that he'd been unloved all this time... i really wish that min would sit down and try to talk to yoochun about his... make him tru to understand why...

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update soon!

[acornmama]

I thought about that too. That Changmin should probably tell him what happened when he was a little boy, so that Chun can understand.

[sweetballads]

Aah, I'm glad you're being honest :) Thanks, I'll keep it in mind for the next chapter! On a sidenote, do you still remember some of those mistakes? I tried to get them out of the story before I posted it but I guess I didn't notice a lot of them. I tried to reread this chapter but I realized I'm just too lazy to scan 20 pages of text again for any grammatical errors XD Besides, English isn't my first language so yeah, mistakes were bound to happen ><;; (I guess it can't be worse than in the last chapter; I had written down a Dutch word instead of the English one so I could look the translation up later... but I kind of forgot about it and I didn't notice it either when I read it before posting. It wasn't three days after I'd updated that I noticed lol but nobody had said something about it either XD

[harunotenshi]

wah~ i don't remember where exactly those minor mistakes are... XD

sorry...

i really hope you can update soon! but you might've had already~ i'm still checking my LJ notifications~ *isbehindbyTHREEDAYS*

good luck on your exams!

[darkcupcakes]

That story gets to me every single time. I cried again ;-;

Poor Yoochun. He is so broken and I wonder if he will ever be able to love again or rather to trust again. I have a feeling though that Changmin will be of great help for his recovery as he already is. Akejskdhdjd I love this story.

I can't wait to read the next part :)

[sweetballads]

Oww, you shouldn't cry ;-; Though I'm very happy the emotions are brought over. <3

I'm really glad you're liking the story :DD And yes, I know :c Yoochun is so broken to the point where recovery is hard. But well, you'll see :) ...if the next chapter will truly be the last chapter rofl. (I fail in planning)

[killboredom]

is this a ray of sunshine in the cloudy rainy day that is Yoochun's life?!

[sweetballads]

I don't know, is it?!