Not as Clueless as Believed *Chapter 7*

Feb 18, 2009 21:34

Title: Not as Clueless as Believed (Sequel to “He Needs to Know” and “Why their Dinner Burned”)
Author: Stephie
Chapters:7
Pairings: Inoobu, Takayama, Arijima, Hikato, and Chiitaro
Rating: Pg-13 for the moment... I may fluxuate
Genre: General I guess, I'm not good with the whole Genre thing...
Warnings: Adult Topics
Summary: Even though BEST tried ( Read more... )

hsj: okamoto keito, story: he needs to know: trilogy, hsj: nakajima yuto, hsj: inoo kei, hsj: yabu kota, hsj: arioka daiki, hsj: yamada ryosuke, hsj: takaki yuya, ex hsj: morimoto ryutaro, hsj: chinen yuri, hsj: yaotome hikaru

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hikari_chan91 February 19 2009, 03:17:41 UTC
wow...that is just the word to describe this chapter...i'm welling up with tears, but i managed to control myself...

not inoo-chan too...they're facing so many difficulties...poor them...

the ending better be good...i don't wanna cry...onegai...

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suteii February 19 2009, 03:27:20 UTC
Sorry I made you almost cry. I really didn't mean to, but like I said in my Author's note, my emotions controlled my writing when I wrote this chapter.

Difficulties are what make a story flow.

The ending, well all I can say is that the last chapter is long, there are waaayyy too many ends to tie up before letting this thing go. I give no spoilers.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm glad I inspired you on your own multi-chap.

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hikari_chan91 February 19 2009, 03:52:29 UTC
you are so right...but i can't seem to be as powerful writer as you are...kanashii...

it's a bit of a hurry if you would want to end it at 8 chaps only...as you said, a lot of ends to tie up...why not let it go on until chap 9? that would a lot better, wouldn't it?

keep on writing, you're my inspiration...

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suteii February 19 2009, 03:55:16 UTC
No no it's going to be 8, if I make it any longer I won't ever finish... Don't worry I'm taking my time on 8, making sure it's perfect, it won't be rushed.

I don't see how I am a powerful writer or how I inspire you but I'm glad to see it works.

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suteii February 19 2009, 04:03:14 UTC
This is your favourite chapter? really? Interesting. Takaki being an idiot was needed in this chapter because it's so sad. I can't have an entirely sad chapter, why depress my readers? I always add in at least one crack line, or in this case two with the Keito comment ( ... )

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suteii February 19 2009, 04:28:27 UTC
well considering I only have two comments on it so far I don't know about it making the readers sad. I know my beta's were shocked, one was sad but the other was just like WTF why did you do that! I just laughed at her.

I wish I had Amie's magic of killing people...woah that sounded weird, but it makes sense in my head, Rescue is a combination with this chapter, I think it was one of the songs I listened to while writing it, there was about five or six songs I listened to over and over when I was in my depressed state.

Yes angry Daiki is something that doesn't come out on paper/screen very often. But I like trying new things in my writing, such as my smutty scenes, I've never done that before but in this trilogy there has been two scenes.

YAY CONFETTI!!! I don't remember the word actually. All I know is that I was inspired when I read it.

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eemir_eera February 19 2009, 09:18:55 UTC
*throws confetti to you and my own self*...aaaaa....

OMG...He got infected too??..aaaaa....T___T....

But really...they should not be there if the bacteria have ability to infect other people...Blame the doctor..huhu..

aaaa....Only one chapter more...T__T...

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suteii February 19 2009, 17:43:56 UTC
I LOVE CONFETTI!!! and you read my author's note! YAY.

Yup he was infected too. But as was explained, it was okay for them to be in there as long as they didn't touch the patient. Otherwise they could be around it, it only transfered through human contact.

Yup just one more chapter, it will be my longest.
Thanks for reading and commenting

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ain_chan February 19 2009, 10:48:41 UTC
STEPHIE-CHAN!!!! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!

lol~ THIS CHAPTER IS AWESOME! YOU'RE AWESOME! IMWAS SO BLEND IN THE STORY! T.T

omg~ so sad~ inoo~ y?? aww daichan~

so many obstacles~ T.T the ending better be good! ^^

or else, i'll haunt you with "PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL" comment on your page every single day~ lol~ XDDDD

lastly, i guess.. im back..? XDDDDD

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suteii February 19 2009, 17:46:32 UTC
I'm glad you liked this chapter! I'm glad you were "in" the story, it means that I wrote it really well. *shameless praise*

Yup he was infected too, and daiki had to take control. The ending will hopefully be good, there are still so many things to cover so I'm taking my time on it.

a sequel? as in another one? are you serious!

I'm glad your back, I am too. *throws confetti for the both of us*
thanks for reading and commenting.

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maplarojcan February 19 2009, 11:48:54 UTC
its me again :D wheeeeee .......i'm guessing you know who me is XD hahaha
anyways wah >.< inoo-chan why >.< i feel so exciting >W< i wanna know what's going to happen next!!!!!!!!!! *is on the edge of my seat* NOOOOO i need to find out waaah >.< .....can you really end this in the next chapter???? .____. well if it's your goal then GOOD LUCK :) wheeeeeee........*gives you cookie* >w< cookies are love.....hahahaha

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suteii February 19 2009, 17:47:56 UTC
you're on the edge of your seat? really? Yup I can end it in one more chapter, don't worry it will be fine. I like cookies. Thank-you for the cookie although confetti is more love.

Thanks for reading and commenting

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