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Not as Clueless as Believed Chapter 7

Feb 18, 2009 21:34

Title: Not as Clueless as Believed (Sequel to “He Needs to Know” and “Why their Dinner Burned”)
Author: Stephie
Chapters:7
Pairings: Inoobu, Takayama, Arijima, Hikato, and Chiitaro
Rating: Pg-13 for the moment... I may fluxuate
Genre: General I guess, I'm not good with the whole Genre thing...
Warnings: Adult Topics
Summary: Even though BEST tried ( Read more... )

hsj: okamoto keito, story: he needs to know: trilogy, hsj: nakajima yuto, hsj: inoo kei, hsj: yabu kota, hsj: arioka daiki, hsj: yamada ryosuke, hsj: takaki yuya, ex hsj: morimoto ryutaro, hsj: chinen yuri, hsj: yaotome hikaru

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suteii February 26 2009, 03:52:39 UTC

im glad you're relieved and you actually decided to finally comment....don't worry im just messing with you.

Yup Takaki noticed because other than him, Daiki is the only one with a calm head at the moment. Yuto is only being strong because he doesn't want to be seen as weak. Hikaru and Inoo on the otherhand don't care they shattered.

That got in there because it needed to be... other wise it is way too depressing.

Thanks for reading and commenting

maplarojcan March 2 2009, 14:43:24 UTC

lol. :D you have me believeing that this is a real sickness na? hahaha! :D

but you know what? there are some parts of this which is a little strange. but im readfing too fast to be able to pick them out. :D grammar wise anyway. :D but that's all.

suteii March 2 2009, 15:36:04 UTC

Do I now? YAY! That makes me happy!XD

Hmm Strange parts? Like where? Edit it for me...I'll give you credit. Like Copy it into a document and then edit it....then email it to me, I'll fix it and give you credit.

Thanks for reading and commenting