Fic: Lurking In The Shadows - 17 NC17

[1smut_princess]

This is early tonight due to the fact that I am going to a family bbq, and it would wind up bein' posted late as poop if I didn't post it now. So here 'tis.

Title: Lurking in the Shadows - Chapter 17
Author: Rhion 
Rating: NC-17 
Summary: He wasn't a nice man by any notion of the word. In her eyes he was little more than a robber baron, some goon who

Comments

[kiyousei]

hee hee... Susan and Caspian are rubbing off on each other :)

i thought Inigo was an ass.. but seeing him with Yasmina... i'd have to pity him.. hopefully, Caspian will show him mercy

[1smut_princess]

*zips lips*
ANd your first statement puts images in my head... *goes off giggling*
D!C: *smirks at Su*So... do I rub off on you?
Su: *blushes and whacks him lightly*You better!

[kitoky]

OMFG, YES.PARALLELS.
<33 Epic.
Every good love story needs parallels. It's a surprise to me that Susan would have trouble with "love" but s'pose with her experiences, she would question---it's almost teenager, and I miss the teenager in her.

I love Inigo and Yasmina, and I hope that Caspian would show mercy --- as it would be a big development --- but it would make sense to torture him. But can I say that I hope Susan will take them both and vow that Caspian will not harm them----well, she'll promise that she'll make Caspian promise not to harm them?

"Please you cannot! You carry more than just my love," pleading.

Is she preggers? Tell me she's preggers. I can live with Yasmina!Susan!Parallel!Preggers.

[1smut_princess]

Yes she's preggers. She won't play a very big role, other than as a mirror... It's' the Inigo/Susan/Luis/Caspian interactions that'll be fun... *giggles*

[1smut_princess]

What Caspian vs. what Susan will do - I really can't say. Heck I can't even really reply to most of the reviews here today, because it'd give too much away.. *grumbles*That's what I get for gettin' good reviews... eesh...Of course I'm thankful for them! And want as many as this little review whore can get.. But its hard cuz I wanna discuss it and can't. *cries*
...
On a lighter note. I finally noticed that Lucyfer has elevated me to demi-god status.
Quick - someone build me a shrine! And if I can just get 11 followers.. I can file for tax-exempt status...

[xxlucyferxx]

*looks around for her shrine-building kit*

Dammit! I think I left it in my locker at school...don't worry dear, I'll get it erected soon.

(Heehee, erected. Ahem...sorry. Immature moment.)

I would love to see you go to the government with that. "Yeah, check this out, bitches! I'm here to teach the world about spiritual redemption through lots and lots of sex between fucked-up spartan-esque douchebags and plain middle-class English history buffs...bow down before me!!"

[xxlucyferxx]

Eeeeek! This is an interesting development...I get the feeling there's going to be some rather peculiar dynamics between Susan, Caspian and the captives. Hmm...<333

[1smut_princess]

Yup yup! More than that I cannot say...