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Fic: Lurking In The Shadows - 17 NC17

Aug 23, 2008 16:49

This is early tonight due to the fact that I am going to a family bbq, and it would wind up bein' posted late as poop if I didn't post it now. So here 'tis.

Title: Lurking in the Shadows - Chapter 17
Author: Rhion
Rating: NC-17
Summary: He wasn't a nice man by any notion of the word. In her eyes he was little more than a robber baron, some goon who ( Read more... )

fanfiction: lurking in the shadows, rating: nc17, author: 1smut_princess

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kitoky August 24 2008, 06:31:34 UTC

OMFG, YES.PARALLELS.
<33 Epic.
Every good love story needs parallels. It's a surprise to me that Susan would have trouble with "love" but s'pose with her experiences, she would question---it's almost teenager, and I miss the teenager in her.

I love Inigo and Yasmina, and I hope that Caspian would show mercy --- as it would be a big development --- but it would make sense to torture him. But can I say that I hope Susan will take them both and vow that Caspian will not harm them----well, she'll promise that she'll make Caspian promise not to harm them?

"Please you cannot! You carry more than just my love," pleading.

Is she preggers? Tell me she's preggers. I can live with Yasmina!Susan!Parallel!Preggers.

1smut_princess August 24 2008, 06:40:37 UTC

Yes she's preggers. She won't play a very big role, other than as a mirror... It's' the Inigo/Susan/Luis/Caspian interactions that'll be fun... *giggles*

1smut_princess August 24 2008, 07:39:38 UTC

What Caspian vs. what Susan will do - I really can't say. Heck I can't even really reply to most of the reviews here today, because it'd give too much away.. *grumbles*That's what I get for gettin' good reviews... eesh...Of course I'm thankful for them! And want as many as this little review whore can get.. But its hard cuz I wanna discuss it and can't. *cries*
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On a lighter note. I finally noticed that Lucyfer has elevated me to demi-god status.
Quick - someone build me a shrine! And if I can just get 11 followers.. I can file for tax-exempt status...

xxlucyferxx August 24 2008, 07:51:30 UTC

*looks around for her shrine-building kit*

Dammit! I think I left it in my locker at school...don't worry dear, I'll get it erected soon.

(Heehee, erected. Ahem...sorry. Immature moment.)

I would love to see you go to the government with that. "Yeah, check this out, bitches! I'm here to teach the world about spiritual redemption through lots and lots of sex between fucked-up spartan-esque douchebags and plain middle-class English history buffs...bow down before me!!"

1smut_princess August 24 2008, 08:18:20 UTC

And.. I hafta do it... *giggles*

"*clears throat*We are the Cult of Rhion. Our goals are to promote fic, particularly that of the Fic (demi)Goddess Rhion. We write fic about her fic. Both that of the original variety and the fanfiction variety. She is an equal oprotunity author. And thus, we the Cult of Rhion, follow her words, and hang upon each - for it is law."

*gets out measuring tape and checks size of head*Hmm... its getting a bit too big... nah, nm. I'm the absolute epitome of humility.
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So long as its in others...

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