Dust in the Sunlight
Title: Dust in the Sunlight
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,623
Disclaimer: Not real and I definitely would never want this to happen in real life. That being said, this doesn’t end happily. Sorry.
Summary: Sergio and Fernando have their last goodbye.
A/N: This is dedicated to Joe. I miss you more than I can ever express ( Read more... )
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,623
Disclaimer: Not real and I definitely would never want this to happen in real life. That being said, this doesn’t end happily. Sorry.
Summary: Sergio and Fernando have their last goodbye.
A/N: This is dedicated to Joe. I miss you more than I can ever express ( Read more... )
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But I will.... soon enough. HAHA.
ily.
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ily Pat and I don't like having you cry. *clings*
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It was just... it's all my fault.
Anyway, I just hope everything will be fine tomorrow. I hope.
But I still wouldn't mind you coming here. HAHA.
&hearts &hearts &hearts
I &hearts you more B! *clomps and clings*
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I seriously hope things are better for you tomorrow too. I really wish I would've written a happy fic now :[
I wish I could go over there. You don't even know how quick I'd be there with you. ♥
*sends you virtual mega hugs*
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Well, you know you're a good writer if you can make a reader cry.
Now I'm gonna go read it again, because I'm masohistic like that.
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It's bittersweet; knowing that I was able to have readers get emotional but knowing that it was sad emotions.
hah I'm masochistic myself...guess that's where this story came out of.
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But wonderful written, I'm so touched now, I can not really write a comment.:(
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Told you it wasn't going to be a happy fic.
Thanks for the comment though. ♥
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Sure I do like happy ends and fluffy stories or movies, but life is not always like that.
You wrote it so well...
It is similar with the story I told you, the one with Iker and Sergio. It is not the usual plot and this is why it is so special. I had it in my mind the whole day today and this is a good sign.
I'm sure it is horrible to lose somebody when you very young and this happened not to me, but I lost my dad some years ago. He was not really old and nobody expected it. He went to bed in the evening and died during the night.
I couldn't say goodbye and I love that Nando could say goodbye to Sergio in your fic.
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I'm sorry to hear about what happened with your dad, I'm sure it must've been a really hard thing to get through. I've lost a few people in the past five years of my life and it always hurts not being able to say goodbye. I've learned not to let myself mourn over things like that too much anymore because it never did any good to be sad all the time. Life is too short.
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I read this fic last night after you posted it and I had to go straight to bed afterwards because I wasn't able to leave a comment. I've been crying for a good hour after reading this. Ohmygod you have no idea, I'm struggling not to start crying again right now, my throat is closed by a knot. You.. like.. guh.. it's so difficult to put it into words, but you kinda touched something so much painful inside of me, I cannot even explain it properly, but the fact is that I started crying at this line:
A Nissan Acura, two minivans, an RV, and a white Audi sports car, on its way to a friend’s house in Madrid with a José Mercé song set on repeat.
and I couldn't stop. I just couldn't. I kept on crying in bed, and I fell asleep with a headache.
I never cry for movies, stories, fiction in general, nothing, never, but this time you did something to me with this, and it just happened. I don't even know ( ... )
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When I read that you cried that much after reading this, I felt sooooooo bad! I didn't know that you'd feel like that from this story.
*hugs*
Thank you so much for the comment though, I'm just really glad that you liked the story even though it wasn't your typical happy Sernando. :/
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aw don't even apologize, I love knowing your reactions to the fic. ♥
<333333333 Thinking about him and just how hard it was to accept that he was gone is pretty much all the emotions throughout the story. I feel like it was a little bit of a way for me to kind of just say goodbye to him. Joe reminded me a little of Sergio sometimes too, the way he'd "live for the moment" and the way that he'd stand up for his friends...it always hurts to know that him doing that is what killed him but he would've been glad to know that he went out like that.
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Oh bb, don't feel bad about it! The fact that I cried so much after reading this means that your story was neat and probably all the emotions you put into it sprung easily, going straight to my heart. I didn't expect I would've felt like this as well, but I'm glad I've read it anyway. It's a beautiful story and even if it's not the happy Sernando which I generally adore, I loved it indeed. So, seriously, you shouldn't feel bad. You're such an amazing writer. :) *hugs* ♥ ♥
♥ Oh good then hehe. :)
<3333333333 Oh bb, unfortunately I know that feeling too damn well. It was a beautiful way to say goodbye to him in my opinion, and I'm glad that you wrote this since it helped you somehow. I'm sure he would've been glad to know that he went out like that indeed, and I bet he'd be proud of you for writing such a wonderful (even if heartbreaking) story for him. *hugs*
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Hopefully I can get a happy fic to come out sometime soon. hah. ♥ ♥
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I'm glad it was written like this now. :] It's really just therapeautik when I read over it.
*hugs*
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