Dust in the Sunlight

[sunlight_dust]

Title: Dust in the Sunlight
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,623
Disclaimer: Not real and I definitely would never want this to happen in real life. That being said, this doesn’t end happily. Sorry.
Summary: Sergio and Fernando have their last goodbye.
A/N: This is dedicated to Joe. I miss you more than I can ever express

Comments

[kristannuccia]

Oh bb. Ohmygod.
I read this fic last night after you posted it and I had to go straight to bed afterwards because I wasn't able to leave a comment. I've been crying for a good hour after reading this. Ohmygod you have no idea, I'm struggling not to start crying again right now, my throat is closed by a knot. You.. like.. guh.. it's so difficult to put it into words, but you kinda touched something so much painful inside of me, I cannot even explain it properly, but the fact is that I started crying at this line:
A Nissan Acura, two minivans, an RV, and a white Audi sports car, on its way to a friend’s house in Madrid with a José Mercé song set on repeat.
and I couldn't stop. I just couldn't. I kept on crying in bed, and I fell asleep with a headache.
I never cry for movies, stories, fiction in general, nothing, never, but this time you did something to me with this, and it just happened. I don't even know

[sunlight_dust]

<33
When I read that you cried that much after reading this, I felt sooooooo bad! I didn't know that you'd feel like that from this story.
*hugs*
Thank you so much for the comment though, I'm just really glad that you liked the story even though it wasn't your typical happy Sernando. :/
♥ ♥

aw don't even apologize, I love knowing your reactions to the fic. ♥
<333333333 Thinking about him and just how hard it was to accept that he was gone is pretty much all the emotions throughout the story. I feel like it was a little bit of a way for me to kind of just say goodbye to him. Joe reminded me a little of Sergio sometimes too, the way he'd "live for the moment" and the way that he'd stand up for his friends...it always hurts to know that him doing that is what killed him but he would've been glad to know that he went out like that.
♥

[kristannuccia]

<33
Oh bb, don't feel bad about it! The fact that I cried so much after reading this means that your story was neat and probably all the emotions you put into it sprung easily, going straight to my heart. I didn't expect I would've felt like this as well, but I'm glad I've read it anyway. It's a beautiful story and even if it's not the happy Sernando which I generally adore, I loved it indeed. So, seriously, you shouldn't feel bad. You're such an amazing writer. :) *hugs* ♥ ♥

♥ Oh good then hehe. :)
<3333333333 Oh bb, unfortunately I know that feeling too damn well. It was a beautiful way to say goodbye to him in my opinion, and I'm glad that you wrote this since it helped you somehow. I'm sure he would've been glad to know that he went out like that indeed, and I bet he'd be proud of you for writing such a wonderful (even if heartbreaking) story for him. *hugs*
♥

[sunlight_dust]

<3333 Well as long as you didn't hate me for writing a sad Sernando story, I'll be okay. :P
Hopefully I can get a happy fic to come out sometime soon. hah. ♥ ♥

♥
I'm glad it was written like this now. :] It's really just therapeautik when I read over it.
*hugs*

[kristannuccia]

<3333 How could I ever possibly think of hating you for writing a Sernando story?!?
Wait..
HOW COULD I EVEN THINK OF HATING YOUUUU?!??!
Nah, I think I'd eat a scorpion alive instead of starting to hate you my dear, it's something I really can't do. :P ♥ ♥
Well I really hope to read a new happy fic but of course, take your time. There are too few Sernando moments lately to get the right inspiration to write them. *sigh* Besides, I could wait forever just to read one of your stories, and you know that. ;)

♥ I'm glad that you wrote it and that it makes you feel good bb. That's all that matters to me. :)
*huuugs* ♥