Comments | sunflower1343: [fic] VF Drabble: A Gift of Melons

sunflower1343

[fic] VF Drabble: A Gift of Melons

Mar 04, 2007 14:04

Title: Drabble: A Gift of Melons ( Read more... )

feilong

Comments 12

tizigirl March 4 2007, 19:21:13 UTC

aww, this is so sweet ^__^

*gives you cookies for writing this

mika_lav March 4 2007, 19:28:24 UTC

It's nice, I really like it. I think that Feilong before being any part of VF would have been an interesting man.
Thanks for sharing. Personally, I like boys better, but little girls are so cute too <3

coles_lover March 4 2007, 21:49:53 UTC

Aw, that was charming. *smiles* Fei doesn't have very many encounters where the other person asks/expects nothing from him so this is truly a *fond* memory for him. BTW, I love eating melon in the summer. *grins*

*hugs*

k_a_s_h_k_a March 4 2007, 22:46:35 UTC

this really is cute ^^ with a bit of saddness but it was still so noice to read about sth an nice as meeting the girl happened to fei ^^ there`s not enough happy and innocent moments in his life...

i crave a melon right now...

mtarashidango March 5 2007, 02:34:44 UTC

This was wonderful - so warm and peaceful despite the purpose of his trip. I love the way you enhance the notion that Fei is very good with kids ^_^ and that deep down, he has a kind heart despite what he thinks is his training and instincts.

Again, you've shown how well you use words to paint such vivid pictures in people's minds. I smiled at the thought of how cute the little girl was as she sat down beside Fei with her half of the melon - and yet, it's not like there were actual visuals to tell me how cute the scene was - it was just your words giving birth to that thought in my mind ^_^

It was a nice rest away from all the tension and fighting that's currently underway in the chapters now. So thank you for the warm and sweet story :)
*hugs and chu*