Touch - Chapter 16

[subtle_shades]

Title: TouchFandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Content Notes: None
Disclaimer: I have no rights to or claims on the Naruto franchise, trademark, copyright, or characters. This is for fun, not profit.
Summary: In the future what's left of humanity sends the Rokudaime Hokage back in time to make some changes. Sadly, they can't send all of her. When a seven-

Comments

[oroburos69]

Chronological review, whateves. The end lines, where you show just how much Jiraiya loves Tsunade (and don't think I didn't see the "he wants babies with her" hint!) is so incredibly perfect in every way, I can't even…My Tsunade shipper-ness is very, very happy.

Okay, back to the beginning!

The way Sakura and Naruto play with Kakashi is just about the sweetest, most sugary thing I've ever seen. I heart it, even as I realize that, from the way you describe their relationships when Sakura is twelve, it's not going to continue. *Sad face*

…Dunking Sakura under the water. We've got a thing, don't we? ;)

“You killed, Sakura-chan!” Probably shouldn't have that comma, but Naruto's anxiety and protectiveness warms the cockles of my heart and I don't even know what a cockle is

[subtle_shades]

Sorry that late response is late! I blame the internet! It went evil and denied me access. *nods firmly*

It is fun to write Sakura, Naruto and Kakashi at play (with Tenzo as an innocent bystander and occasional referee)! But 12 and 26 for Sakura and Kakashi respectively seem to be hard years. They managed to hit awkward, ungainly phases at the exact same time.

It is ridiculously hot where I am right now. I am firmly behind anything and everything that involves water. Pools, lakes, rubber duckies, rivers, pods, tentacles - if it involves large puddles of cold water, I am so into it! (Plus, we are sharing a fandom brain wave at the moment. It is strange and fascinating

[goldfishlover73]

Aw! This was so adorable. I love the thought of pervy Hokage! Blackmail for the win! Believe it!

[subtle_shades]

LOL Little Sakura has a thing for blackmail. She has a gift for finding and using it. *nodnod*

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[tealeavz]

OMG I have wifi! I loved loved loved this chapter. It was such a nice surprise after my long flights and waiting for my third and last connection. Sakura's so sneaky! I love it. Can't wait for more!

[subtle_shades]

YOU ARE SO LUCKY!! *ahem* Thanks! I'm so glad to have surprised you! Jiraiya's right - Sakura is a kitten. All sweet and cute and fluffy until it starts mauling your stuffed animals and leaving dead things on your pillow.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! (Especially considering your traveling status!)

[izzymatic]

cute! I can just imagine little sakura with pouty cheeks and it makes me want to pinch them like an old lady

[izzymatic]

oh and just to add a comment for the very end of the story... *smirks* I see that you did there and i gushed over it. "always"

[subtle_shades]

*beams* I fangirl so hard for Jiraiya/Tsunade! So. Hard.

[subtle_shades]

As the girl who was once the kid with squeezable cheeks I am firmly against all forms of cheek pinching! And yet... I occasionally want to

[juniper_11]

I tried to comment before but my stupid computer went *cRaZy*.

So...what did I say? Um, I know I loved the Jiraya's ending comment. Sometimes it's so hard to just stop loving someone. I'm glad in the end I know they two got together.

And I loved Sakura's delicious evilness with their froggy friend.

[subtle_shades]

I understand! Computers are like cats! *nodnod*

*grins* Jiraya definitely snags the best lines for himself. (And I might be mistake for a crazed Tsunade/Jiraiya shipper. Y'know, in the right light.)

Poor frog. He was traumatised. *grins*

Thanks for reading and commenting!