Touch - Chapter 15

[subtle_shades]

Title: Touch
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Content Notes: None
Disclaimer: I have no rights to or claims on the Naruto franchise, trademark, copyright, or characters. This is for fun, not profit.
Summary: In the future what's left of humanity sends the Rokudaime Hokage back in time to make some changes. Sadly, they can't send all of her. When a seven-

Comments

[oroburos69]

OMG THEY HAD BABIES! I love you, it's exactly what I was hoping for. I was all, what if they had babies? That would be so cool, and Tsunade deserves to have herself a happy family, OMG, YES!!! (...You probably knew that I like Tsunade with a happy family, though, didn't you? :D)

*SO EXCITED*

And is that Icha Icha about Sakura and Itachi? ...Please? Pretty please?

And, and, what did she DO? I wanna know so badly!

Also, that Kimono is oddly perfect for Sakura to have been her older sister's...

And poor sad Kakashi. Momo didn't know she was getting him a coat like Minato's, did she? Dramatic Irony Awwwww!

The Sasuke POV was interesting. Very...Bringing issues up with out resolving them-y. You're bad about that, but I like it.

[goldfishlover73]

Holy fuck I totally missed that it was like Minato's! I knew there was something oddly familiar but I didn't make the connection! Thank you for saying that because FUCK I done missed it!!!!

[subtle_shades]

YES THEY DID!! You and I are so on a fandom wave together. It is shiny and curly and cracktastic. And yes, I may have suspected that you'd like Tsunade with a happy family. (I do too!)

Tsunade definitely deserves the family she's always wanted - online research shows that Kishi is just being mean to her. She hasn't hit the average menopause age so she could've had a to-remember-him-by-baby with Jiraiya! (A really nice Kishi wouldn't have randomly killed and not resurrected Jiraiya but that's a different issue.)

You'll find out all the gory Icha Icha Quest details in the next genin!Sakura installment - but it'll be ages before the story says directly what Sakura did to enrage Jiraiya.

Momo is very clever about kimono and coats. Hopefully, I'll remember to explain it when we get to the appropriate place but she did get those coats because of Minato. Occasionally Momo's thoughtfulness cuts both ways.

Yes, I like bringing up issues to leave them hanging until it's the right moment to strike!, uh, later.

[goldfishlover73]

Why?! WHY!?
You leave me on the edge of my seat every FREAKIN time! So much I don't know! So much I NEED to know! >.<;;

[subtle_shades]

Teeheehee! I like suspense! (When it's happening to other people, at any rate.)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[c_tennyo13]

!!! now i want to know what happened with Jiraiya!

[subtle_shades]

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! My evil plan is working then! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[tealeavz]

OMG YES AN UPDATE! You've made me so happy you have no idea. Ahem, now onto the chapter

[subtle_shades]

YAY! I AM GLAD YOU'RE HAPPY!

It is some of the best blackmail material Sakura has ever gotten her hands on! And she is not ashamed to beat a dead horse!

Bwhahahahaha! Yes, I like curiosity and confusion in the ranks! I could answer your question but it would ruin the story's plotiness!

Kakashi is prudish when it comes to Sakura and perversion. (To be fair, his thoughts about what she's probably thinking about are *way* dirtier than her thoughts actually are. It's that gap between being nearly-thirteen and actually being twenty-six.)

I'm glad that you like the Haruno family!

Ohhhhh! Trip abroad! Lucky! Have fun and be safe and eat something amazingly exotic yet tasty! There'll be chapters waiting for you when you get back!

[tealeavz]

I truly dont mind being left wondering :)
It's part of what keeps me checking for that next update. So although I always moan and complain about it, I secretly enjoy it.

And I think that's part of what's so hilarious, the fact that Kakashi is thinking she's thinking waaaay dirtier thoughts than she really is; he mananages to make himself uncomfortable

And thank you! Now I'm looking forward to coming back :)

[joya_oscura]

Another great chapter. I got to ask though, what did Sakura do that apparently made Jiraiya mad enough that he might never talk to her again? Was it stated in an earlier chapter and I just forgot, or was it something that has yet to explained?

[subtle_shades]

Hi there!

You haven't missed the sore point between Sakura and Jiraiya. It has yet to be explained.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!