Touch - Chapter 15
Title: Touch
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Content Notes: None
Disclaimer: I have no rights to or claims on the Naruto franchise, trademark, copyright, or characters. This is for fun, not profit.
Summary: In the future what's left of humanity sends the Rokudaime Hokage back in time to make some changes. Sadly, they can't send all of her. When a seven- ( Read more... )
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Content Notes: None
Disclaimer: I have no rights to or claims on the Naruto franchise, trademark, copyright, or characters. This is for fun, not profit.
Summary: In the future what's left of humanity sends the Rokudaime Hokage back in time to make some changes. Sadly, they can't send all of her. When a seven- ( Read more... )
"There had always been people watching him and admiring him and then some of those people seemed to want to kiss him. And some of those people were definitely not girls"
This was so great and it made me smile so much. Instantly my mind went to the Naruto-Sasuke kiss that will forever be the best blackmail material ever!
Next, I was so excited when I saw Tenzo mention that Sasuke would meet Sakura's mentor later, I literally did a little arm waving dance because I knew Tsunade would be making an appearance ... and then you made me all curious and confused again (You're way too good at that)!
"don’t want to keep imagining Kakashi or Tenzo or anyone else looking at me someday with Jiraiya’s eyes. Sakura thought, remembering Nakago’s crazed laughter and Jiraiya’s wide-eyed anguish and Tsunade’s shaky but approving nod. I just… I don’t want to be dependent on something that I won’t have later if - if I decide to do something awful. Another awful thing, really."
What!?!? What did she do?! What are the seals for? Why does Jiraiya hate her now!? How do Kakashi and Tenzo not know yet? Does anybody else know? AND WHAT IS IT?
Also, I loved that the cover of his book had a pink haired woman being chased by a man with a scar on his face. How does Kakashi NOT see that? It's also so cute that he pinches her everytime she has a "dirty" thought about him. :)
And everytime Naruto was treated as a member of the Haruno family made me clutch my chest and want to go "aaaawww"; it's just so heartbreakingly sweet. And Oh Momo, I love her more and more the more we get to read about her, she's just so awesome.
Overall you've definitely left me with more questions than answers (seems like no answers yet, really ...), but I still loved this update.
PS. if you update during August and I dont review it is because I am in Ecuador for 30 days, not because I don't love your story!
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It is some of the best blackmail material Sakura has ever gotten her hands on! And she is not ashamed to beat a dead horse!
Bwhahahahaha! Yes, I like curiosity and confusion in the ranks! I could answer your question but it would ruin the story's plotiness!
Kakashi is prudish when it comes to Sakura and perversion. (To be fair, his thoughts about what she's probably thinking about are *way* dirtier than her thoughts actually are. It's that gap between being nearly-thirteen and actually being twenty-six.)
I'm glad that you like the Haruno family!
Ohhhhh! Trip abroad! Lucky! Have fun and be safe and eat something amazingly exotic yet tasty! There'll be chapters waiting for you when you get back!
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It's part of what keeps me checking for that next update. So although I always moan and complain about it, I secretly enjoy it.
And I think that's part of what's so hilarious, the fact that Kakashi is thinking she's thinking waaaay dirtier thoughts than she really is; he mananages to make himself uncomfortable
And thank you! Now I'm looking forward to coming back :)
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