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subtle_shades

Touch - Chapter 15

Aug 03, 2011 12:04

Title: Touch
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Content Notes: None
Disclaimer: I have no rights to or claims on the Naruto franchise, trademark, copyright, or characters. This is for fun, not profit.
Summary: In the future what's left of humanity sends the Rokudaime Hokage back in time to make some changes. Sadly, they can't send all of her. When a seven- ( Read more... )

pg-13, naruto, touch, fanfic

Comments 16

juniper_11 August 4 2011, 00:44:41 UTC

She killed Nagato?!?! Well, then, I can understand Jiraiya's...unhappiness. But that was a really brilliant twist there. Madara can't take a Rinnegan...wait he did take it from Nagato's dead body so we're sure that Sakura made sure that couldn't happen right? Or maybe I'm reading more into this than I should.

I loved that you put Sasuke's persepctive in the beginning. That was cool. And you had some wicked cool lines in this. I think my favorite was Ino's comment about 'starting trends'. I loved it. It was such a bff thing to say.

subtle_shades August 4 2011, 14:51:07 UTC

TThere is literally nothing I can say to you about your Nagato theories without incriminating myself.

I really vacillated about Sasuke's perspective so I'm glad you liked it. And I love Ino so I'm glad you liked her line.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

hullo129 August 4 2011, 02:54:08 UTC

Aww, mini Sannin's!! =D And triplets at that! I love that you got them together. It was horrible in the manga seeing Jiraiya walk to his death, and Tsunade obviously distressed but not willing to say she cared. Haha, I'll have to get used to thinking about them as parents ( ... )

subtle_shades August 4 2011, 15:08:43 UTC

Yes, that was an awful scene. Especially when you knew, as a reader, that simply not admitting to loving Jiraiya was not going to protect him from her curse. She was going to have another regret at the end of things.

I'm glad that you liked that scene! Yeah, it only took *years* to get Kakashi relaxed enough to hug her back.

I love Jiraiya. I really, really do. And I think he's got a very soft heart. But he and Tsunade are looking at things from entirely different perspectives.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! I really enjoyed your review! Thanks for reading and commenting!