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Hiding Here 4 (Jay/Onew)

Jan 04, 2011 16:32

Title: Hiding Here
Topic: Jay (TRAX) and Onew (SHINee)
Warnings: Angst, Implied sex
Summary: Jay and Onew have a secret relationship.
Parts: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6

Notes: Hello lovely reader types. Something truly awful happened to me. My hard drive crashed and I lost all that I hold dear. ;_; So guess what. As I've lost all my K-pop music ( ( Read more... )

fw: fic, t: jaynew

Comments 8

volatileflame January 4 2011, 23:11:19 UTC

i'm glad MinHo's supportive. i hope the others can be the same.

strongbabypanda January 4 2011, 23:49:01 UTC

Oh! That reminds me. I apologize to all Minho fansss. This chapter of the story especially kind of turned into my own life of forbidden love, and Minho was just saying direct quotes and I don't think I worked much 'Minho' into it. :(

Thank you for your commenttt.. the others may not even find out before this fic is over. :O I'm not sure yet.

kaybee38 January 4 2011, 23:52:32 UTC

spot

kaybee38 January 5 2011, 06:04:20 UTC

I am just fascinated by this pairing. AND this fic. they really care so much about each other, and of course, Minho is being the sensitive donsaeng. Great job!

lefty_215 January 5 2011, 01:01:46 UTC

SPOT. BRB~~~~~

lefty_215 January 5 2011, 05:48:00 UTC

Okay, now that I have reread and taken it in more, I can comment.

Okay okay, the whole opening it awesome and quote worthy but I'll try not to.. LOLOL

He began to step away, but Jinki caught him by the wrist. "Wait a minute.."

GUHHHHHH. Onew.. guhhhhh...

Jay was overcome with nerves, noticing a passing by stylist looking in their direction with wide curious eyes.

LOVE THIS. YES. I know I'd be watchin'...ho ho ho...

"You're bothering me." he wanted to say. "Leave me alone", "You're being annoying", it all passed through his head and he bit down on his tongue to hold it in. He'd ended things with Jinki so there'd be no more risk, and here Jinki was being riskier than ever.

kldfjsldkgjdflkgj LOVE THIS WHOLE BIT. TRULIFE.

But apparently Jinki was losing it too.

As Jay was doing his very best not to glare, he saw Jinki's eyes - he saw them get suddenly a little shinier. Wetter.

If Jinki cried, what lie would they have to tell to cover it up?

But Jay's anger suddenly lessened. Because he wanted to cry too.MY HEART ( ... )

lefty_215 January 5 2011, 05:48:53 UTC

I'M SORRY, THAT GOT WAAAY TOO LONG... *FAAIIIIL*

hikaritsubasa January 5 2011, 05:30:45 UTC

they were...they were...
i don't know sad...no i'm the one who is sad...
but Minho is supportive...
hope did doesn't lead to really un happy things!