QR / Chapter 18 - Lifeline

[streetscribbles]

Title: Quiet Revolution / Chapter 18 - Lifeline
Author: street scribbles
Rating: R
Summary: There is Draco Malfoy. And Albus Dumbledore. Hermione Granger. Cedric Diggory. Ron Weasley. Harry Potter, too. Sirius Black. If only we all had an extra lifeline.
A/N: Told you guys I didn't forget ♥. Anyway, I hope it's decent. :) Let me know! And the

Comments

[lorrrbe]

Oh, oh. I loved this, so much. You are such a good writer, but I think I've already told you that. All the bits about the water and drowning were so heartbreakingly beautiful and at the same time there were some really funny lines and this made me laugh through my tears which is always a great thing.

“Ahh, so you decided to put your underwear on outside your pants and play superhero?”

Ahaha, I love Draco.

“I want to be the one to save you,” she said lowly, her voice raspy.

ASKASKASHADHDA. Just, oh.

And the last line, oh my god. This was definitely one of the best chapters. ♥

[streetscribbles]

Yeah, this was one of my top favorite chapters to write for, so I'm glad you liked it. :) And thank you for everything else! I was scared I kinda went for overkill with the whole water/lake/swim thing, but, hey, at least I drilled the chapter's theme into people's heads. And you got it! :D Again, thank you! I really appreciate all the sweet comments. :)

[freyza]

*dies of over-stimulation of the imagination* wow. This chapter was so mindblowing--so full of great imagery and metaphors and the last scene!!!!! oh my GOSH that was just so... wow. Kind of hot. Haha. I'm kind of speechless. Note how my vocabulary has gone straight out the window. I loved how Draco "breathed" the line when he had stopped holding his breath. That's great, like a paradox but not.

Thank you! For this and the Grey's! =D

[streetscribbles]

So, exactly how stimulating did it GET! ;D

Thank you for everything you had to say! It put a huge smile on my face. :D This is slowly going up there to one of my favorite chapters, so I'm glad it affected you. :) Seriously, thank you!

Hey, on another note, episode 2? Yeah . . . YEAH?! DUDE! You watched? And loved? Yes? :D

[freyza]

RE: the stimulation: Some of the scenes made me choked up, some made me really tense as I was imagining what would come next, and the last scene made me blush. Haha.

the file's 60% finished, so it'll be another 10 hours or so until I can watch it... =( But I'll definitely let you know what I think after I see it!

[streetscribbles]

Ahh! NOW have you watched it [Grey's] yet?! ;D

Aw, the last scene made you blush. No worries! I was writing it and thinking, dude, what do I do? Write from personal experience, watch porn, read porn, think of what turns me on? NO. I can't do ANY of that, cause those all make ME blush. So I just cheated and made it one of those fade-to-black scenes. Yay!

[anonymous]

ohhhhhhhhh damn girl. that was SO SO SO SO SO good. i feel like i jsut ate a whole bowl of icecream. :)

[streetscribbles]

As a Huge Icecream Fan, I'm really flattered here. Color me HAPPY, girlfriend! Thank you. :)

[ohmemory]

JKD;ASDASJKAD!!!
I'm speechless. But in a good way. In a fwoaar-that-was-insanely-awesome kind of good. :D

The part where Hermione figured out how Draco died was..quite easily put, heart-breaking. Gaah. And I LOVE the part in the spell where Ron comes to Hermione after she's been saved by Harry. I'm pretty sure I went 'AWWWH!' in front of my computer right then.

Also?
“You have to come with me! If I go, you go!” Hermione said.

“I will. Let’s jump.”
Am I the only one having a total Titanic moment from that? 'You jump, I jump' LOL :D

[streetscribbles]

Dude, you rock. Your icon's cute, too. And the part where Ron approaches Hermione after the incident really means a lot to me, like, more than Harry does in that scene. And that's big, so I'm really glad you liked it. YAY FOR RON! And yay for you. :D

And don't even START! That's TOTALLY original, man! DUDE! I get accused of copying movies way more than what is normal! Haha, maybe I should start to reevaluate all the movies I've seen.

But hey, as for the rest ;) -- thank you! You're way too sweet, and I enjoyed getting this. :)

PS. I busted a stalker move and checked out your userinfo, you're a Harry/Pansy fan?! DUDE! I love them -- they're awesome.

[ohmemory]

YAY FOR RON>HARRY! I don't know, but I think fanfiction has been making me turn away from Harry lately. The poor boy. :P

Harry/Pansy is awesome. Almost as awesome as Draco/Hermione. But has fandom hidden the H/P fic stash in a supersecret website from me or is there really that few fics of them? Woe.

[streetscribbles]

Really? I can't decide who's worse off with the portrayal in fanfic between Ron and Harry. I feel like a lot of authors fuck them both up pretty badly. So I feel ya.

Really? What've you read? I'm working on an H/P right now, actually. And I know a few talented writers who've tried it also, if you want any recs! Just holler! :D

[sexcasually]

you like to post right before i go to bed. so i always stay up later to read. lol

it was brilliant. truly. im loving the d/hr action. it makes me squee! lol

[streetscribbles]

I do, I do. Masterplan, baby.

But, thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it!