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QR / Chapter 18 - Lifeline

Sep 22, 1996 19:54

Title: Quiet Revolution / Chapter 18 - Lifeline
Author: street scribbles
Rating: R
Summary: There is Draco Malfoy. And Albus Dumbledore. Hermione Granger. Cedric Diggory. Ron Weasley. Harry Potter, too. Sirius Black. If only we all had an extra lifeline.
A/N: Told you guys I didn't forget ♥. Anyway, I hope it's decent. :) Let me know! And the ( Read more... )

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freyza September 23 2006, 04:57:03 UTC

*dies of over-stimulation of the imagination* wow. This chapter was so mindblowing--so full of great imagery and metaphors and the last scene!!!!! oh my GOSH that was just so... wow. Kind of hot. Haha. I'm kind of speechless. Note how my vocabulary has gone straight out the window. I loved how Draco "breathed" the line when he had stopped holding his breath. That's great, like a paradox but not.

Thank you! For this and the Grey's! =D

streetscribbles September 23 2006, 10:07:37 UTC

So, exactly how stimulating did it GET! ;D

Thank you for everything you had to say! It put a huge smile on my face. :D This is slowly going up there to one of my favorite chapters, so I'm glad it affected you. :) Seriously, thank you!

Hey, on another note, episode 2? Yeah . . . YEAH?! DUDE! You watched? And loved? Yes? :D

freyza September 23 2006, 20:58:06 UTC

RE: the stimulation: Some of the scenes made me choked up, some made me really tense as I was imagining what would come next, and the last scene made me blush. Haha.

the file's 60% finished, so it'll be another 10 hours or so until I can watch it... =( But I'll definitely let you know what I think after I see it!

streetscribbles September 24 2006, 09:31:24 UTC

Ahh! NOW have you watched it [Grey's] yet?! ;D

Aw, the last scene made you blush. No worries! I was writing it and thinking, dude, what do I do? Write from personal experience, watch porn, read porn, think of what turns me on? NO. I can't do ANY of that, cause those all make ME blush. So I just cheated and made it one of those fade-to-black scenes. Yay!

freyza September 24 2006, 20:28:33 UTC

LOL at your comment. I think the way you wrote it was very classy. The fade-to-black technique lets the readers use their own imaginations to imagine the scene as dirty (or as chaste) as they want. haha ( ... )

streetscribbles September 24 2006, 20:56:52 UTC

UGH. I loved McVet when Meredith bumped into him at her house. That was so fucking SWEET. I want my own McVet, especially now after learning what the real McDreamy is like. :/ But oh my GOD, I can't agree with you more re: Addison. I LOVE Addison, I always have. And I have a friend here who hates Addison - thinks she's a bitch, hates her because she was the initial cheater, and, whatever, and that last scene will totally bring it on home for her. And it makes me mad, because I still love Addie. AWW. I hope she doesn't leave the show. :( BUT, DUDE, how GREAT was that last shot when the STEAM was trailing out of the door after you-know-who? Hilarious. And HOT. :D

No thanks needed! Happy to help out a fellow Grey's fan! And thanks for all the comments on QR. (Forgot which post I was commenting in ;D)

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