My first exclusively sheyla story O_O

[hypercaz]

Some of you might have seen that I posted in the thread on gw that I might write 17 short ficlets to celebrate my birthday. Not sure about 17, but here's number 1. It's my first ever story on just sheppard/teyla and I'm a bit worried about it. =)

Rating:  PG
Length: Less that 400 words

too short for a summary ;-)

1. Night Breathing

John Sheppard woke

Comments

[doxymom]

LOL. Cute. That was cool. Love how she kicked him out and he actually went.

[hypercaz]

Thanks for reading and liking. =) Since you commented I edited a few bits but what you liked stayed the same.

[athosiangirl]

Oh I Loved This! This was such fun to read! I had a huge grin on my face when Teyla pointed towards the bathroom and John 'slunk' off...Wonderful Caz!

Can I expect 16 more ficlets?

By the way...slightly late...but Happy B-Day Caz!!!!!

[hypercaz]

16 more? Um. I guess it would be an excellent opportunity to delve into sheyla writing...maybe... =) I'm glad you liked it - actually I'm relieved lol.

[cpt_ritter]

OH..... this is so truely Caz it's hilarious!!!

ROFL

[cblade_007]

Caz...that was wonderful....wasn't sure what was going to happen with the first few lines...but it sure got interesting...and Shep pouting...I could just picture his 'puppy dog'look...:-D

[ceekaysheppard]

Very cute! I love the last line! :D