✧ do to me what you want to ✧

Nov 25, 2013 00:23

✖ do to me what you want to
✖ zitao/jongin; nc-17
✖ jongin likes the loss of control, the overwhelming helplessness of zitao holding him down. 6842w.
☠ resistance play/consensual non-consent, humiliation, mention of knife play, subspace

✖ thankyou to marshmallow for all her handholding, sends kisses ♡

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p: zitao/jongin, l: one-shot, !fic, r: nc-17, f: exo

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hipployta November 25 2013, 06:09:50 UTC
Umm...Hey!

No but seriously awesome take on the relationship dynamics, discovery of new interests, and safety parameters for such activities

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steponherneck November 26 2013, 13:50:49 UTC
thankyou for reading :)

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misshoa November 25 2013, 07:48:23 UTC
It was cute, it was hot, it was beautiful, and you described the relationship dynamics so amazingly. One of the best fics I've read in the last few months.

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steponherneck November 26 2013, 13:52:45 UTC
waaah, (*/∇\*)thank you so much!! ♡
i'm ✧glad✧ you enjoyed it so much;;

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g_odalisque13 November 25 2013, 12:20:43 UTC
oh my god this was perfect.
so perfect that i literally had to try four times to properly type 'oh my god.'
kink fics when done well are basically my favorite and this was done so, so well.
i love how it went from jongin realizing that he liked zitao holding him down to him thinking about it and having a conversation with zitao to the actualact.
most people skip that middle step, but that makes it so much hotter and more realistic.
loved this so, so much. amazing job. ♥

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steponherneck November 26 2013, 13:55:35 UTC
(๑•́ ω •̀๑) build up is everything!!! and also, makes everything a lot more fun :3
thankyou so much for this sweet comment :((
you are many many ✧kindness✧ ♡♡

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liberosis November 25 2013, 21:42:47 UTC
jesus fucking shit

this was literally a form of perfection. that is all. no, actually that's not all.

okay, first off, I love your prose. it flows really nicely and it's super comfortable and fun to read. second, I loved the way you made jongin struggle with this newfound desire. it just seemed so true to his character, the hesitance, the fear of rejection, how he, himself, wasn't sure about anything and how he's slowly started exploring it in his mind. you constructed it incredibly well. thirdly, there were analogies that I really liked, sentences that made me go back to read them once again like:

It makes his heart shrink down a size or two, like it’s been thrown in the dryer but when it bursts back out, stretches back to it’s original size, it brings something rushing forward as well, dizzying almost.idk I just really liked this one omf ( ... )

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steponherneck November 26 2013, 14:05:55 UTC
(;へ;)(;へ;)(;へ;)
thankyou so much!! i'm just, this was so nice and i don't really know what to do with everything sobs. tbh this fic was so self-indulgent and i'm just so glad you enjoyed it so much;;;
aahhh, you picked out like two of my favourite lines kekeke~✧ jongin's really forward in some ways but i've noticed he's also kinda shy and i wanted him to express what he wanted but with kinks there's always that little bit of fear attached, that maybe what you ask for is going to be too much. i've wanted to write this kink for a while and i really couldn't see it with any other otp so yes. zitao's the right kind of indulgent, especially when he doms.
but really, thankyou so much for your nice comment 。:゚(。ノω\。)゚・。
it made my day ♡

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charliebnim November 25 2013, 23:05:42 UTC
damn this was so cool !! i really liked that jongin finally said what he wanted and that tao heard him <3 the power of listening

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steponherneck November 26 2013, 14:06:31 UTC
thankyou for reading :3

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