✧ do to me what you want to ✧

Nov 25, 2013 00:23

✖ do to me what you want to
✖ zitao/jongin; nc-17
✖ jongin likes the loss of control, the overwhelming helplessness of zitao holding him down. 6842w.
☠ resistance play/consensual non-consent, humiliation, mention of knife play, subspace

✖ thankyou to marshmallow for all her handholding, sends kisses ♡

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p: zitao/jongin, l: one-shot, !fic, r: nc-17, f: exo

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taokai November 26 2013, 20:44:51 UTC
Wow I don't even know where to begin!
This is just so amazing, the way you wrote Jongin is so perfect and real and the way that you wrote Zitao is also so perfect and amazing.

“I know you’re scared,” Zitao sounds awfully soft, like he doesn’t want Jongin to scamper off, always more willing to run away from his problems than face them. “But you don’t need to be. Whatever it is, I’ll be right there with you because I want to be.”

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“Please,” Jongin begs, eyes beginning to water and Jongin can see the flash of concern in Zitao’s eyes but he’d promised not to stop unless Jongin used the safe word. “Please stop.” 
^ I don't know what it is about this but it's just so powerful like i've reread this so many times.

I love how original and different this is to others i've read, thank you so much for sharing it and thank you for writing TaoKai (it's so rare ;;) they are the perfect pairing for this ♥

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rebel_kai November 27 2013, 15:13:39 UTC
jongin really Oo

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yumelory January 11 2014, 13:21:54 UTC
This was AMAZING! I loved absolutely everything, especially the build up (the smut was flawless too). I just have so many feels right now, I can't even bring myself to write a coherent comment, so I'll just leave it at this before starting to fangirl like crazy again

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mutantbic January 15 2014, 02:51:56 UTC
whoah. is there suddenly less air around or is it just me? the development here was right on pace and i found myself right there with Jongin. I like how there was the glimpse of Tao's vulnerability there too.

Likes so much :D

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zombiecheeze April 16 2014, 20:03:21 UTC
I wish I'd known about this a long time ago, because oh dear lord. I found myself tearing up along with Jongin as things progressed and actually had to go wipe my eyes after the fact. What a dynamic, you've done a phenomenal job and I really, /really/ need to go change my pants now. :b Thank you for sharing. :Q

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