Primeval fic: Alone

Nov 02, 2012 20:45

Title: Alone
Word count: 100
Rating: Gen
Characters: Danny
For P100 challenge 287: Silence

They lay huddled together as if seeking comfort. The mother’s hand clasped her child’s shoulder while her baby rested against her breast. Danny closed his eyes to prevent the threatened tears from falling. They didn’t deserve to die.

He moved onwards. There were ( Read more... )

primeval, fic, drabble, danny

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fififolle November 2 2012, 21:23:23 UTC
Oh Danny! No! *hugs him*
That was very powerful. *whimper*

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stealingpennies November 3 2012, 10:15:52 UTC

Joins you in hugging Danny and making it all better. I did feel bad for him as I was writing. :(

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lukadreaming November 2 2012, 21:31:20 UTC
Oh wow! That packs a punch.

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stealingpennies November 3 2012, 10:09:30 UTC

Thank you - punch is always good to hear! :)

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knitekat November 2 2012, 21:46:10 UTC
Eek! Poor Danny. That was powerful.

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stealingpennies November 3 2012, 10:07:50 UTC

Thank you. Yeah, it is horrific fate for Danny. :(

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fredbassett November 2 2012, 21:56:02 UTC
Oh wow, that's definitely a scarily powerful drabble!

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stealingpennies November 3 2012, 10:06:36 UTC

Thank you! I did feel bad for poor Danny.

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adafrog November 2 2012, 23:21:05 UTC
*cries*

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stealingpennies November 3 2012, 09:51:19 UTC

Oh no! *hands over tissue* All Danny has to do is find another anomaly to a point further back in time and kill Helen before she can kill everyone else. See? No problem!

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adafrog November 3 2012, 22:54:43 UTC
*Wills Danny to find one*

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