Primeval fic: Alone

Nov 02, 2012 20:45

Title: Alone
Word count: 100
Rating: Gen
Characters: Danny
For P100 challenge 287: Silence

They lay huddled together as if seeking comfort. The mother’s hand clasped her child’s shoulder while her baby rested against her breast. Danny closed his eyes to prevent the threatened tears from falling. They didn’t deserve to die.

He moved onwards. There were ( Read more... )

primeval, fic, drabble, danny

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freddiejoey November 3 2012, 02:56:31 UTC
Beautifully written

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stealingpennies November 3 2012, 09:47:30 UTC

Thank you! :)

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raptor_moon November 3 2012, 03:27:37 UTC
Very sad. Nicely written.

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stealingpennies November 3 2012, 09:44:52 UTC

Cheers - thanks for commenting. :)

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clea2011 November 3 2012, 22:24:36 UTC
Oh no! Poor Danny!! Excellent drabble!

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stealingpennies November 5 2012, 13:22:54 UTC

Cheers! This prompt seems to have inspired a bit of an angst-fest.

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47eleven November 4 2012, 01:31:58 UTC
This is fantastic!!

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stealingpennies November 4 2012, 16:27:10 UTC

Lovely comment - thanks :)

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lsellersfic November 4 2012, 16:29:31 UTC
Meep!

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stealingpennies November 5 2012, 13:20:54 UTC

...um...squeek. (Danny's tough. He'll survive.)

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