See it through my eyes (sequel to 'Crave')

Jul 08, 2009 21:04

Title: See it through my eyes
Chapter: 1/1
POV: First person, Danny's POV
Author: stargirl82  
Fandom: McFly
Pairing: Flones (Tom Fletcher/Danny Jones)
Rating: PG
Warnings: hurt/comfort.
Wordcount: 1976
Disclaimer: Don't know, don't own. This isn't real.
Author's note: by popular demand, here's the awaited sequel to Crave. Enjoy.

~ See it through my eyes ~ )

character: tom fletcher, pairing: flones, character: danny jones, oneshot

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surfinthesun July 9 2009, 18:45:53 UTC
I've read all your flones stories :D just never got around to commenting on them sorry!

I felt kind of bad for Danny when he lost his record deal but I think that needed to happen. Maybe now he and Tom could make their own band :P lol

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stargirls_words July 10 2009, 22:51:44 UTC
awwww, thanks, haha. well, better late than never, right? ;)

and i agree, it had to happen in order for him to realise that he can't go on like this. *nods* tom's gonna be there to catch him if he falls. xD

thank you for reading and commenting! it really means a lot! :D

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yaoi4yuri July 9 2009, 20:58:22 UTC
oh my.. -cries!-
well done! XD
you have successfully made me cry in both 'Crave'; and this sequel :')
Yay for the happy ending!
Flones will always come through no matter what!
(y)

Loved it! Can't wait to see more fics from you :)

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yaoi4yuri July 9 2009, 21:38:02 UTC
Oh! And just because I love your fics so much :)
I also second the sequel to the sequel :) hehe

X

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stargirls_words July 10 2009, 22:47:17 UTC
since quite a few people are still not satisfied, lol, i'll see what i can do about the sequel to the sequel. :P

thanks again! x

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stargirls_words July 10 2009, 22:46:22 UTC
thank youuuu! <3
well, i'll take that as a compliment, yes? haha. i'm glad you liked the stories and that you approve of the ending... xD

thank you for reading and commenting! it really means a lot! x

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elisa88 July 10 2009, 01:44:17 UTC
aww, go Danny.. hihihi
poor thing was just protecting his heart. It was still very mean from him to treat Tom like that! But at least Tom was patient and waited for him to realize he looveeeeeeeeeees him muchly XD

=)

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stargirls_words July 10 2009, 22:48:36 UTC
yeah, it was but he didn't feel like he could open up to tom at that time. fortunately tom's a cutie and loves him too much to just give up on him. ;)

flones FTW! lol.

thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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asu_chan July 10 2009, 05:26:01 UTC
Awww...I will always love you. ♥

Poor Danny...but I'm so glad that Tom is always there for him to make him feel better and Danny finally realised it, too. :)

And this
In fact, I didn't think that Tom had a single bad bone in his very gorgeous body. is so beautiful. ♥ ♥

Thank you very much for writing a happy (end) sequel. <3
Like the others I vote for a sequel to the sequel, too. :P

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stargirls_words July 10 2009, 22:49:47 UTC
awwwwww, haha, thank you! :D

as i've mentioned about five times now, lol, i'll see what i can do about the sequel to the sequel! ;)

<3

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justapicture July 14 2009, 08:37:11 UTC
Aw yay, happy end! I know Danny couldn't really be such a jerk. (he's too cute!)

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stargirls_words August 15 2009, 14:10:12 UTC
haha, yeah, he is such a cutie! <3

thanks for reading and commenting! :D

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