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stargirl888

The Road to Faberrittana (2/?)

Jun 05, 2011 16:36

Title :The Road to Faberrittana 2: Storming Out .

Author: Stargirl888

Word Count:

Spoilers: None

Pairing: Brittany/ Rachel (platonic for now), Brittany /Santana

Rating: M

WARNINGS: Consensual Disciplinary Spanking

Summary: Rachel behaves selfishly and Quinn’s out of town. Good thing Brittany’s around to give her some perspective.

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Comments 5

ext_465346 June 5 2011, 17:20:08 UTC

You will probably need to do a couple pass overs for some minor grammar errors here and there, nothing major ( ... )

stargirl888 June 6 2011, 08:43:50 UTC

No, not over critical - I appreciate the input ( ... )

cranberry_pi June 6 2011, 02:51:03 UTC

Still absolutely loving this verse - I wish I had something really unique to say about this particular chapter, but I really am just totally enamoured with this!

stargirl888 June 6 2011, 08:45:48 UTC

It doesn't matter if it's not unique, I just like knowing you're still enjoying it :D

Thanks for commenting

heyafan June 6 2011, 20:01:34 UTC

I was in need for a new verse and that was a beautiful gift. your verses are getting better and better. I feel you are writing these verses with deeper meaning, IDK, I cant explain (definitely cant explain in a different language). It's just a powerful reading for me.
BTW, I love the way you portrait Brittany. Even in the verse where was punished she is an interesting character.
Just loved!