The Road to Faberrittana (2/?)

Jun 05, 2011 16:36



Title :The Road to Faberrittana 2: Storming Out .

Author: Stargirl888

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Spoilers: None

Pairing: Brittany/ Rachel (platonic for now), Brittany /Santana

Rating: M

WARNINGS: Consensual Disciplinary Spanking

Summary: Rachel behaves selfishly and Quinn’s out of town. Good thing Brittany’s around to give her some perspective.

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brittana, pairing:brittany/rachel, faberrittana, spanking, learning lessons verse, santana/brittany

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stargirl888 June 6 2011, 08:43:50 UTC
No, not over critical - I appreciate the input.

I did actually consider writing the conversation between Rachel, Brittany and Quinn in A Surprisingly Tame Argument but then it came out pretty much exactly the same as Rachels suggestion as to how the arrangement would work, making it seem rather redundant, but now I think I may add it as a flashback in a later chapter.

I'm glad you think I got the right conbination of bitchy'ness and restraint for Santana because I really wanted to show that she is still Santana, just with a bit more consideration. (i.e. she hasn't lost herself in her relationship with Brittany, as can happen in these types of relationships if the dom is too dominant)

To write Brittany strictly according to cannon I find near impossible, but I don't particularly like canon Brittany that much anyway (though I do have a small hope for her after the S2 finale), which is why I tend to change her character into something that fits better with my headcanon.

I think I may go back to put in more of Brittany's feelings during her interraction with Rachel (to be honest I wasn't origionally even going to really address Brittanys feelings with the Brittany/Santana ending but it just sort of happened)

I'm purposely not mentioning the idea of a the poly relationship yet because I don't think its something any of the girls are really even considering it (I don't think most people would unless they had already heard of poly relationships)...i'm hoping for it to be like they're growing closer and leads up to it being a case of them dating just being the next (il)logical step. (Thats the plan at the moment anyway but I'm not sure if it'll happen because I think I need to do some general, girls hanging out together type installments for that to work and I'm not really inspired to write those right now)

Thanks for all the feedback :)

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