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Miharu perched on the edge of her bed, and Nino plodded over to her in bare feet.
“I’ve put the light table into the room, and the computer is off,” Miharu reported wanly, folding her hands in her lap.
“Thank you.” He sat down on the carpet beside her feet, hugging his knees and bringing up the rolled-open ( Read more... )
“I’ve put the light table into the room, and the computer is off,” Miharu reported wanly, folding her hands in her lap.
“Thank you.” He sat down on the carpet beside her feet, hugging his knees and bringing up the rolled-open ( Read more... )
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i need to organise my thoughts, i'm grinning like an idiot.
do you know i read this twice, and i read it slowly?! XD this has got to be my first R fic or something, you should be really honoured, seriously XD bwaha.
first things first.
you do write classy sex. i am in awe, THANK YOU for not making it porn. really, you don't know some of the things in books out there. and i don't feel pervy after i've read it, which means it is not porn but 'proper' sex. am i saying this correctly? to make it all epic and nice? XD ( ... )
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heather, i am hoping you don't kill me for this, and i am going to sleep. i am very much inclined to link this to Six Months to Glory, but i think i should ask for your permission first. how about it?
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Adfldsjafda!! ♥♥♥ That was the greatest comment (and longest~) I've ever gotten on anything. I am so relieved that I managed to hit the nail right on the head with this one. It's one thing to muck around with idols and real people (in a way) but it's a whole new ballpark when it's ann original character, and someone else's at that. To be honest, I had forgotten about their first meeting but the first time with anyone is always a bit nerve-wracking.
I did go back and reread a lot for this, checking facts and things they said. It was almost as much research as I would do for Equilibrium! But well worth it. I kind of had the condom episode thought up before I started because it would be totally cute and she said in her letter how she liked that Nino spoke through his actions. ♥ And it's real. When people have sex, someone has to get up and get the condom ( ... )
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after i posted my comment i went to read ALL THE GREAT BIG ARASHI FICS + THIS ONE and i felt so content even though i only clocked in like 4 hours of sleep XD
i know i wrote them, but it's different when there is actually a spin-off XD
the original line in my head was お前を思いついたら俺が耐えられないと思う, i'm hearing something alone those lines for the last line of this story XD wonder if it will help you with the title?
man i should have referred you here earlier, just to aid in research: http://oviparous.livejournal.com/tag/fic
i feel so touched *sob* that you did so much research. and i noticed that you took into consideration the colour of the walls after i read the part about the sun turning them into the colour of milk tea AAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHH you are wonderful!!!!!!!
there's this thing i said about miharu here liking nino's adam's apple that i thought you'd appreciate for some morbid reason XDDD
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its always been arashi pairs.
this was a nice change. although it took a while to get used to it, it was only a short while :))
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I really put a lot of work into this, I had like 3 of her fics open at once and went back to check on things, details and little things one of them said or did because I wanted the transition to be seemless. But of course you can still see a bit of my wordy style there. ;)
I mostly wrote this for me because I wanted to read about their first time and take a break from the gay for a while.
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For me the transition felt really natural. It seemed to be a lot of work so thumbs up!!
Take a break from the gay LOL and we know how hard it is when our fandom is breaking gay-record everyday --> ANS
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its just strange to read about them. *Lol*
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Thank you for writing in the scene that everyone wished to read. You stayed true to Miharu, being the OC that she is, and Nino the lovable imp.
“It’s fine. I have some,” he said against her lips. “Wait here.”
Nino went to Miharu’s bathroom and wrapped one of her towels around his hips. It hid nothing and he could hear her laughing as he looked through peephole and then stuck his head into the hall, looking both ways before dashing out barefoot, just as he’d come in. Having a relationship with your neighbour was perfect for keeping it secret as long as the other residents or your landlord didn’t catch you naked in the hallway. He returned barely a minute later, replacing the towel in the bathroom and leaving a box under the left side of the sink. I LOVE THIS SO HARD. SO HARD YOU HAVE NO IDEA. Of course Nino would sleep with a girl who forgets to have condoms so he has to go get them. Even if Nino is straight he would have to get the girl closest to ( ... )
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