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Miharu perched on the edge of her bed, and Nino plodded over to her in bare feet.
“I’ve put the light table into the room, and the computer is off,” Miharu reported wanly, folding her hands in her lap.
“Thank you.” He sat down on the carpet beside her feet, hugging his knees and bringing up the rolled-open ( Read more... )
“I’ve put the light table into the room, and the computer is off,” Miharu reported wanly, folding her hands in her lap.
“Thank you.” He sat down on the carpet beside her feet, hugging his knees and bringing up the rolled-open ( Read more... )
Adfldsjafda!! ♥♥♥ That was the greatest comment (and longest~) I've ever gotten on anything. I am so relieved that I managed to hit the nail right on the head with this one. It's one thing to muck around with idols and real people (in a way) but it's a whole new ballpark when it's ann original character, and someone else's at that. To be honest, I had forgotten about their first meeting but the first time with anyone is always a bit nerve-wracking.
I did go back and reread a lot for this, checking facts and things they said. It was almost as much research as I would do for Equilibrium! But well worth it. I kind of had the condom episode thought up before I started because it would be totally cute and she said in her letter how she liked that Nino spoke through his actions. ♥ And it's real. When people have sex, someone has to get up and get the condom. It doesn't just magically appear on you out nowhere.
But now she doesn't have to buy any (for a while) becasuse Nino gave her his box. ♥ And she can learn what kind he likes without having to ask~ Hahaaaa.
Ahhh the last line I struggled with and rewrote a few times. Since it's not the end of your epic and there's stuff that happens after I didn't want them to say/do anything that would have jumped any kind of emotional timeline that you had already thought up. I'm glad it works for you! :D Maybe I should add a translation of that line and use that as the title instead. XD
I really want to respond more but there isn't much else I can say except that I was grinning like an idiot about how much you liked this. :) Please do link this to your fic. I think people who enjoy your universe would like to know about this too. And I thought I had more to say but I have 15 minutes to get my ass out the door to work. :
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after i posted my comment i went to read ALL THE GREAT BIG ARASHI FICS + THIS ONE and i felt so content even though i only clocked in like 4 hours of sleep XD
i know i wrote them, but it's different when there is actually a spin-off XD
the original line in my head was お前を思いついたら俺が耐えられないと思う, i'm hearing something alone those lines for the last line of this story XD wonder if it will help you with the title?
man i should have referred you here earlier, just to aid in research: http://oviparous.livejournal.com/tag/fic
i feel so touched *sob* that you did so much research. and i noticed that you took into consideration the colour of the walls after i read the part about the sun turning them into the colour of milk tea AAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHH you are wonderful!!!!!!!
there's this thing i said about miharu here liking nino's adam's apple that i thought you'd appreciate for some morbid reason XDDD
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okay. go you!
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