Fic: Monsters, All of Us 4/4

[squidwhisk]

Title: Monsters, All of Us
Part: 4/4 A Stranger’s Obituary and a Friend’s Bullet
Warnings: Graphic description of senseless violence without any empathy.

Prompt Link: http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/2727.html?thread=5813927#t5813927
Notes: squidwhisk.livejournal.com/1355.html. The Drama Llama runs rampant through this fic. Levity might

Comments

[drakochi]

I am glad you updated it. :D

I promise that I will read it after work and leave a better comment.

[squidwhisk]

*waits on tenderhooks*
I'm very humbled that you are tracking updates to this fic :)

[drakochi]

I read this story a couple of weeks ago and was quiet gutted that chapter 4 was not posted yet. So I was happy when I saw it updated

[squidwhisk]

Wow, thank you so so much, I'm glad you liked the story and the plot and wow, thank you!

I'm so sorry that the story took so long to write. I am a perfectionist when it comes to characterization, and if I don't feel it's on I go crazy and rewrite chapter three to four times.

For my style of writing, I'm super glad you enjoy the detail. I am a big fan of description and setting as I am a visual learner so I want to "see" what the character sees and thus extensive (and sometimes needless) description follows. Luckily I have an incredibly talented beta who has culls needless sentences and balances description with with clarity.

As for dead people. The smell is unforgettable and very not good.

Also, Thank you thank you thank you for your kind comments. I am very flattered and very humbled!

[redzont_007]

OH! YAY! Update!
*happy dance*

[squidwhisk]

Awww thank you <333

[knotted_rose]

Lovely. Absolutely lovely, the whole thing. Thanks so much for sharing!

[squidwhisk]

I am so glad you like it! I really enjoyed writing it (when I wasn't tearing out my hair!). Thank you!

[bugeyedmonster]

Enjoyed reading this.

[squidwhisk]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[nix_this]

This is wonderful, completely riveting and in verse. <3

[squidwhisk]

Thank you so much! I'm glad it kept your interest and you found the people in-character :)