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Fic: Monsters, All of Us 4/4

Jun 11, 2011 11:33

Title: Monsters, All of Us
Part: 4/4 A Stranger’s Obituary and a Friend’s Bullet
Warnings: Graphic description of senseless violence without any empathy.

Prompt Link: http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/2727.html?thread=5813927#t5813927
Notes: squidwhisk.livejournal.com/1355.html. The Drama Llama runs rampant through this fic. Levity might ( Read more... )

ツ Harry Watson, ∫ic | MAOU, ∫ic | complete, ツ John Watson, ツ Sherlock Holmes, sherlock bbc (2010), ツ DI Lestrade

Comments 15

accioayla June 14 2011, 13:56:35 UTC

Seee? More than just me!

I got the LJ notification right as I was heading to bed last night, and because of my bedtime drugs, I had to pass out before I could read it! I was quite put out. But then this morning came! I dashed down the stairs and started reading even before I had my coffee!

This is wonderful darling. Perfectly, amazingly, grippingly wonderful. I loved the characterization throughout and when Sherlock got hit over the head I gasped and flailed a bit. There was, I admit, a bit of 'Save him John, you're his only hope!' going on in my head.

And then John and Harry saved him and everything turned out okay and eeeeee!

So yeah, I enjoyed it. Thank you so much for writing it.

squidwhisk June 25 2011, 04:29:53 UTC

I am so glad you liked it! I agonized over the chapter for about 7 months. Wow, when I think of the timelines like that I feel pretty lame.

As it was predominantly the characterization that was slowing the fic, seeing you positively comment on it makes me stupidly happy. I'm also glad that you were ok with Sherlock not solving the case and getting kidnapped rescuing on top of that! In my brain, it's only fair that such things happen to him once in a while :P

Thank you so much for your kind comments!

bittergreentea December 20 2011, 23:43:12 UTC

Fantastically written fic. I absolutely love how you've written Harry and how she and John can get underneath each others' skin like all siblings can. Also, the snippets of John's past and those text messages that you've peppered throughout the fic really added so much more depth to story, and it only goes to highlight John's character. Of course, it wouldn't be much of a Sherlock fic without a murder and you've managed to weave that in seamlessly with everything else. That was quite fortunate of me to have randomly stumbled on to this rare gem. <3