Comments | sororcula: Numb3rs drabble: Better Take Note (Colby/Liz, PG-13)

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Numb3rs drabble: Better Take Note (Colby/Liz, PG-13)

Sep 03, 2008 20:19

Title: Better Take Note
Pairing: Colby/Liz
Rating: PG-13
Summary: It's the first time he's seen her apartment.
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: none per se, but it's meant to take place after 4x17 Pay to Play.
Notes/Warnings: Unbetaed. Title from Midnight by the Red Hot Chili Peppers (which, incidentally, also provided the title for the last Midnight ( Read more... )

numb3rs100, fanfiction, rated pg-13, n3 fic, drabbles, het, colby/liz

Comments 24

elysium1996 September 4 2008, 17:22:49 UTC

i like this line

he doesn't know about her--it's a lot. More than he realized

sororcula September 4 2008, 23:43:28 UTC

Awesome! I'm glad you liked it. :-)

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sororcula September 5 2008, 14:15:38 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

(Your icon is PERFECT.)

paranoid_woman September 6 2008, 01:59:07 UTC

I'm so not into Colby/Liz, but this was really good! It had mystery, suspense, it was lovely! :)

sororcula September 6 2008, 05:00:55 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks. :-)

mustangcandi September 7 2008, 22:49:05 UTC

I still can't get into the idea of Colby and Liz, but this was lovely... :) Nice job!

sororcula September 7 2008, 22:59:15 UTC

Haha. Thanks! I'm glad you liked it anyway. :-)

mustangcandi September 8 2008, 04:50:18 UTC

Well, I would have enjoyed Colby/Liz if there had been no Don/Liz. We can't be making Liz the office h0r. She deserves better than that. But I liked Colby's perspective on this.

(I'm not trying to be a pest, but I was about to post part 2 of the baby!fic... and then realized maybe I should ask if you still thought it needed edits. Only if you have time my dear... just tell me to shove off. I just thought I'd ask.) *hugs*

sororcula September 8 2008, 04:56:13 UTC

I know, the Don thing sucks, but I like C/L enough to overlook it. Anyway, Don is still like five times the office whore Liz is. LOL.

OH, you are so not being a pest! I've been feeling bad all weekend about not getting back to you on that. I didn't really have time to go through it thoroughly, but I'm sure it's fine; the edits that I would have made to the original version were tiny things like commas here and there, nothing big. :-) Sorry I wasn't able to respond about it earlier.

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boymommytotwo September 13 2008, 09:29:08 UTC

like this "midnight drabble" bit... and c/l did have some chem goin on in 4x17, didn't they... i really like this and hope for more!

sororcula September 13 2008, 18:24:57 UTC

Thanks! They most definitely did have some chemistry. :-)