Numb3rs drabble: Better Take Note (Colby/Liz, PG-13)

Sep 03, 2008 20:19

Title: Better Take Note
Pairing: Colby/Liz
Rating: PG-13
Summary: It's the first time he's seen her apartment.
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: none per se, but it's meant to take place after 4x17 Pay to Play.
Notes/Warnings: Unbetaed. Title from Midnight by the Red Hot Chili Peppers (which, incidentally, also provided the title for the last Midnight Read more... )

numb3rs100, fanfiction, rated pg-13, n3 fic, drabbles, het, colby/liz

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mustangcandi September 7 2008, 22:49:05 UTC
I still can't get into the idea of Colby and Liz, but this was lovely... :) Nice job!

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sororcula September 7 2008, 22:59:15 UTC
Haha. Thanks! I'm glad you liked it anyway. :-)

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mustangcandi September 8 2008, 04:50:18 UTC
Well, I would have enjoyed Colby/Liz if there had been no Don/Liz. We can't be making Liz the office h0r. She deserves better than that. But I liked Colby's perspective on this.

(I'm not trying to be a pest, but I was about to post part 2 of the baby!fic... and then realized maybe I should ask if you still thought it needed edits. Only if you have time my dear... just tell me to shove off. I just thought I'd ask.) *hugs*

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sororcula September 8 2008, 04:56:13 UTC
I know, the Don thing sucks, but I like C/L enough to overlook it. Anyway, Don is still like five times the office whore Liz is. LOL.

OH, you are so not being a pest! I've been feeling bad all weekend about not getting back to you on that. I didn't really have time to go through it thoroughly, but I'm sure it's fine; the edits that I would have made to the original version were tiny things like commas here and there, nothing big. :-) Sorry I wasn't able to respond about it earlier.

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mustangcandi September 8 2008, 12:24:27 UTC
Don is still like five times the office whore Liz is.

hahaha. Ok, I'll give you that one.

Don't feel bad about the baby!fic... I actually forgot about it and then started to post yesterday and said "WAIT!" I didn't want you to think I didn't want your opinion or that I was posting behind your back or anything. I know that sounds silly but I wouldn't have asked you to read it if I didn't want your thoughts. The edited version I sent had about 200 words cut out of it and I did a lot of comma rearranging and deleting as well as deleted all but about five of the (...) so, I think we're good. I'm going to post it today after I figure out what the heck I'm doing at work today. Been here 45 minutes - still have NO idea. *looks around the office* Yeah. No idea.

*hugs*

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rodlox June 21 2011, 08:52:59 UTC
babyfic?

as adorable as I think it would be to see Callie holding a baby...I can't picture her pregnant. she'd judo Colby to itty bits.

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