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Apps Page v.2 [OLD]

Jul 29, 2018 19:19

ATTENTION: THIS IS THE OLD APPLICATIONS POST. THE NEW ONE IS HERE.

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Applications are only open for the first two weeks of the month. That is, from the 1st through the 14th. Applications close at exactly 12:00 AM (CST) on the 15th of the month. Any applications ( Read more... )

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fan_of_the_cat July 7 2009, 04:29:47 UTC

[Player name]Emily
[Age]17
[Personal Journal]SaberViolinist
[Other characters currently played] Tohru Honda / Fruits Basket/ Fan_of_the_cat
Saber/ Fate/stay night/ Lady_king or Exgeneral Saber

[Character name]Tohru Honda
[Age]18
[Canon]Fruits Basket
[Point in time taken from canon]After chater 122 to 123, just after she falls from the cliff.

fan_of_the_cat July 7 2009, 04:30:56 UTC

[Background] Tohru Honda is orphaned at the beginning of the series after the death of her mother in a deadly car accident, she lives in a tent in the woods alone when her grandfather’s house is undergoing some remodeling due to his eldest son’s family moving in with them. Tohru, unknowingly, is living on the Souma families land. On her way to school, she stumbles upon Shigure’s house and stops to admire some of the clay figures that were left to dry outside of the house, she was equally surprised to see her classmate, Yuki Souma, who had been living at Shigure’s house for sometime before her appearance outside. Walking to school with Yuki, she explains to him that she lived nearby and that’s why she had accidentally appeared outside of his house ( ... )

fan_of_the_cat July 7 2009, 04:31:08 UTC

After the event, Tohru begins to learn the true meaning of the curse. She sets a goal to try and break the curse to help the Souma’s, but she is truly doing it to save Kyou from being sent to live alone. She learns that he would be confined during a trip to the summer home; she also learns that Akito is the “god” of the curse. She becomes distress about Momo and her separation from her brother Momiji. Momo doesn’t not know that Momiji is actually her older brother, the same day she met Momo, she was on her way to speak with Kureno Souma about her friend Arisa and her longing to see him. Kureno explains to her, later on in the series, why he cannot see Arisa anymore. Coming over a few setbacks and warnings- from Rin Souma who wants to free Hatsuharu from the curse, Tohru begins to develop feelings for Kyou and wanting to break the curse more than she had previously wanted ( ... )

fan_of_the_cat July 7 2009, 04:31:38 UTC

[Personality]Depicted as a usually cheerful, polite, selfless, and extremely kind person is how Tohru is described by others. Often throughout the series Tohru shoulders the burdens of other people around or not wanting to burden them with her own problems. Several characters, including Kyou Souma, tell her not to take on so many things because she could end up becoming gravely hurt emotionally, or even physically, in the end. To keep herself from being a burden to others, she lives in a tent during her grandfather’s house remodeling rather than staying with a friend and she pays her own school tuition so she wouldn’t burden her grandfather ( ... )

Thread 7

ADIANE APP pt1 izgrejala July 7 2009, 21:34:10 UTC

[Player name] Ariel
[Age] 17
[Personal Journal] izgrejala
[Other characters currently played] nein *u*

[Character name] Adiane the Elegant
[Age] 28
[Canon] Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann
[Point in time taken from canon] after episode 12

ADIANE APP pt2 izgrejala July 7 2009, 21:34:34 UTC

[Background] Adiane the Elegant was the 2nd General of the Spiral King's Four Supreme Generals, the only woman among them. She was good friends with General Thymilph, though General Guame joked that they had a 'closer' relationship. Ask this to Adiane and she would imply that their friendship was strong because Gen. Guama and Gen. Cytomander treated her as an inferior because her gender, while Gen. Thymilph respected her as a warrior ( ... )

ADIANE APP pt3 izgrejala July 7 2009, 21:35:54 UTC

[Abilities] Adiane's scorpion tail does sting and when it does, it hurts...a lot. At the same time, Adiane is very skilled in hand-to-hand combat/martial arts.

[Other important stuff] .....She's a pretty mean lady *u*

[Sample post]

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Either I've gone to Hell or I'm having a lucid dream...a really...really bad lucid dream...

*looks up* ....When did Lordgenome remodel Teppelin? And why is it floating?

Tch, nevermind that.

VIRAL!!!! ....*silence*

Where's Viral? And those idiots, Guame and Cytomander? *gasp* My Ganman! Where's my Sayrune?!

WHERE THE HELL AM I?! *rage*

[Which rule was your favorite and why?] Using another character journal :D
[Any questions?] NO :3

Wavering somarium_lords July 16 2009, 05:07:02 UTC

Unfortunately we cannot accept your application at this time. While the application was good overall, the personality and sample sections are too short/lacking.

While you do get most of her character, we'd like to see a bit more elaboration for her personality. The sample could also be a bit longer and more defined to her character. At the moment it's a bit too general.

If you could reply to this comment with the revised personality and sample sections, we will review it and give you a response ASAP!

You have until July 23.

Reever Wenham Application: sodaplusmeisotp July 8 2009, 00:53:29 UTC

[Player name] Jensu
[Age] 23
[Personal Journal] soundninjakin
[Other characters currently played] None.

[Character name] Reever Wenham
[Age] 26
[Canon] D.Gray-Man
[Point in time taken from canon] After the 4th level akuma attacks HQ.

[Background] Not much is known about Reever's background. The things that are known are that he's age 26 and works as the Section Chief under Komui at the Black Order. He's often seen as the one who gets the most abuse from Komui when Komui always demands him to do things while Komui takes naps and Reever's forced to work long hours ( ... )

Reever Wenham Application: sodaplusmeisotp July 8 2009, 00:55:44 UTC

The entrance to where the Egg is sealed off from outside sources, Reever and his team members trapped inside with Bak and another head of a branch. One by one, members of the Science team are killed by Lulubell's henchmen, and Reever's yelled at by Bak to stay put, Reever wanting so badly to save his members that he's near the point of tears. The Tragedy hits too close to home when one of his prime members, Tapp, is killed and made into one of the henchmen, but when enough becomes too much, Reever shoots the evil who turned Tapp in the head. Bullets, however, don't seem to phase the creatures and the creature comes close enough to touch Reever, but in nick of time, Allen comes to the rescue ( ... )

Reever Wenham Application: sodaplusmeisotp July 8 2009, 00:55:59 UTC

[Sample post] His eyes were heavy. The attack just happened and finally a moment was taken for himself to rest, possibly the longest rest he was able to have in these past months. Finally...sweet rest ( ... )

Wavering... somarium_lords July 16 2009, 05:16:18 UTC

Unfortunately we cannot accept your application at this time. While the application was good overall, the personality section is a bit too short. We realize that Reever is a minor character, but we'd still like to see this section be a bit longer, and elaborate some on the points that are mentioned.

If you could reply to this comment with the revised personality section, we will review it and give you a response ASAP! You have until July 23.

Thread 7

Part 1 of ?? proud_illusion July 8 2009, 05:48:51 UTC

[Player name] Dana
[Age] 15
[Personal Journal] proud_illusion
[Other characters currently played] Urahara Kisuke / Bleach / highlvlfakeout
Ada Bezarius / Pandora Hearts / onkittypatrol

[Character name] Gareki
[Age] 15
[Canon] Karneval
[Point in time taken from canon] In the time between Ch. 15 and Ch. 16. Before they get to Rinoru, and he probably fell asleep in the plane, sooo.

Part 2 of ?? proud_illusion July 8 2009, 05:49:34 UTC

[Background] Gareki's childhood is, for the most part, not a very happy one. He was sold by his parents, or rather who he assumes was his parents, when he was at the age of 8. After that, he was bought on board a transport ship, where many other people who were sold also stayed. Since they were all crowded in one room, some of the people started to bully the weaker ones. Despite not being weak, Gareki was the smallest one there, and was also bullied because of it. He realized at some point during the trip that they were putting something in the food, and more and more of the people were getting ill ( ... )

Part 3 of ?? proud_illusion July 8 2009, 05:50:10 UTC

But the kid wouldn't let him have it so easy, wanting to go with him outside. It was simple enough to Gareki, and he could possibly use this kid. The bracelet he'd found, while taking anything valuable in sight, seemed to belong to this scrawny child, after all. In exchange for learning a bit more, he'd be willing to let the him out. Once the kid happily agreed, Gareki shot off (what I'm guessing was) the tracking bracelet off Nai's wrist with a gun. They went through some brief introductions, and Gareki learned that the kid's name was Nai ( ... )

Part 4 of ?? proud_illusion July 8 2009, 05:50:52 UTC

After a moment of brain lapse at the idea of being considered a nice person, Gareki does pretty much the opposite of what a genuinely nice person would do. Deciding to strike up a deal, he asks what compensation he'd get for following Nai around. He goes with the original plan and asks for the bracelet in exchange for taking care of Nai. When brought up with the challenge of the bracelet belonging to Karoku, Gareki says that Nai can just ask Karoku if he can give away the bracelet (whilst thinking to himself that it'd be the case scenario if Karoku's not dead). Nai agrees, and an awkward partnership of sorts is formed. Pulling off yet another disguise, this time pretending to be a gang member which isn't hard when he looks naturally scruffy , Gareki intercepts the chief and points him in the direction where the gang actually is. Revealing that he managed to get the bracelet back when he bumped into the chief, he decides to also leave a little parting gift for the chief. Previously having rigged the meeting place with alarms, he made ( ... )

Thread 10

that_duster July 9 2009, 06:47:45 UTC

[Player name] Orange
[Age] 22
[Personal Journal] tsuchann
[Other characters currently played] None, currently.

[Character name] Duster
[Age] 25
[Canon] Mother 3
[Point in time taken from canon] In the second chapter of the game, Duster gets washed out of the basement of Osohe castle.

[Background] Duster was raised by his father who was very strict in teaching him the thief arts. His father also practiced tough love, often referring to Duster as "that moron". An accident while training led to Duster losing some function of his right leg. (Here comes game plot...)When strange things start happening in his hometown, Duster's father sends him on a mission to steal a precious item from a nearby castle. Due to Pigmasks breaking into the castle, Duster takes a spill and (now I've deviated it...) nearly (or maybe he does) drowns.

[Personality] Duster is a man of few words and always seems to keep a level head. He's a bit of a loner and prefers to be a night owl. An injury to his right leg left him with a limp and, along with his slightly bad ( ... )

Declined. somarium_lords July 16 2009, 05:10:18 UTC

Unfortunately we are unable to accept your application.

We feel that your application is far too short in all areas, and gives us little to no sense of what the character is actually like.

You are free to apply for this character again in the next application round, or for another character at any time.

Re: Declined. tsuchann July 16 2009, 15:12:30 UTC

Understood. I was hoping I wouldn't have to write an encyclopedia like everyone else, but that seems to be the RP trend nowadays. :) Just not my style.

Thanks!