[ficlet] The Breath Between Us, sasuke/suigetsu

[soleil_et_pluie]

Title: The Breath Between Us
Rating: NC-13? Whatever.
Pairing: Sasuke/Suigetsu
Length: 1,640
A/N: I don’t have an excuse for this, I don’t even have a reason! Apparently I am still a sucker for water motifs, no matter how… incurably stupid they may be. My brain told me this was hot, and who am I not to listen?
Summary: This can best be

Comments

[prettypriestess]

This is wrong on so many levels. This is so unfair it's disgusting. I am completely offended by the fact you have talent as an artist and a writer. This is totally not okay. My rampant jealousy declares that we cannot be friends anymore. D:<

(omg sasuke and suigetsu humping the tank, and the descriptions of Suigetsu as he appears, and the end. srsly. this is so unfair it's not even funny.)

[soleil_et_pluie]

Oh psh. Psh. i am a lunatic, and writing fic about ninja humping each other through glass, i think, proves this. XD

oh, the end. i wanted to try my hand at sad endings :x

[prettypriestess]

Psh. i am a lunatic, and writing fic about ninja humping each other through glass, i think, proves this. I am going to find an occasion on which I can quote this out of context and embarrass you. (Is there a context in which I could quote it in context and not embarrass you? Probably not.) Publicly. And then no one will visit your journal but me! And then no one will know how clever and talented a writer and artist you are and your f-list and I will keep you all to ourselves.

LALALA, I AM PRETENDING THE ENDING IS NOT SAD. If I acknowledge it as sad, I will cry, so I am reminding myself that they TOTALLY get back together and have awesome sex while Karin is not looking. (Though she totally wishes she was.)

treasure planet icon! I am in love with you all over again, that is so cool. <3

[soleil_et_pluie]

Quote away, mua, though it does make me seem kinda crazy. Oh darling, you are adorable. MY FLIST IS SO SMALL. yours is huge ;_;

The ending's just... Sasuke being a dick. I'm sure they hook up more and suigetsu creeps on him and it's all jolly. I sortof wanted to write this because that scene where they meet in canon really sortof implies Sasuke already knew who he was/that they had already met, since Sasuke says, "i wanted you 3, because you're the best of the best." CLEARLY THAT "KNOWING EACH OTHER" WAS SEKRITLY HOOKING UP. >____> my shipper mind, there is no help.

treasure planet is my faaaaavorite i <3 jim hawkins

[nthcoincident]

This is the first fic for them I've ever read, because I have no idea what the hell this pairing is, so CONGRATULATIONS? <3 Suigetsu is like baby Kisame on my end, and Kisame is obvi part of Itachi's harem, so this makes for a very unpalatable love...parallelogram. BUT THAT'S OKAY THIS WAS HOT.

I like the beginning, where Suigetsu is taunting him and being a general creep. TENSION. HORMONES. WATER TANKS. Hell yes.

[soleil_et_pluie]

d'aw thank youu ♥
i've never written it before, and i know very little about it, but one day i decided it was hot, and went to find fic of it, only to be cruelly disappointed by ffn.net, so i decided I CAN DO BETTER THAN THIS. and this... mush is what resulted? XD

Suigetsu is totally baby Kisame, and right on, Itachi totes does have a harem XD oh my god, can i tell you, i spent tonight with my naruto-inclined friend playing the video game and shouting things at each other like KATON! GOKAKYU NO JUTSU! AND ROKU JI JOUNSHO! etc etc, and oh my god, between us, we know a really embarrassing amount of jutsu names. he knows how to do the handseals. and the accompanying quickseals. :x we are dorks.

[nthcoincident]

It IS hot. The scene where Sasuke "recruits" him is so suspicious; have they trained together, or what the hell is going on? WHY ARE THEY BFFS? Did Orochimaru have Christmas parties for all his minions, or...

OH THE VIDEO GAME I too have played it with the baby bro, except only when Itachi was unlocked. It has lulz value because you can have matches like Itachi v. Tenten, which, what. I WANT TO LEARN THE HANDSEALS. Is it even physically possible to do them that fast?

[soleil_et_pluie]

Have you read Mai's Sasuke/Kimimaro fic, An Exercise In Futility? It has some hilarious guesses as to what Oro-jisan's christmas parties/life at the hideouts might be like.

Their english voices are somewhat nauseating, but if you pair certain people together, they do really entertaining specials, like Itachi/Kisame have a water & genjutsu attack together, Tsunade & Sakura, Jiraiya & Naruto, Kurenai & Asuma, Hinata & Neji, Shikamaru & Chouji, Orochimaru & Kabuto, Gaara & Temari or Kankuro, etc.
God, Itachi is so cheap in that game, because his bunshins can attack for him. :D it's kinda fun, though, dorking it up

[theirempires]

YOU ARE GOOD AT WRITING PORN. IS THAT A COMPLIMENT? YES, YES IT IS.

And pffft, NC-13? I'm pretty sure that this is comparable to any other NC-17 fic out there. ;D

[venusian_eye]

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I *read* this, wherever you crossposted it to. And I came here via bitter_nakano and OMG YOU ALSO WROTE THIS lsdflaskdfasdfs

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