Fanfic - An Excerpt [Hawaii Five-0: Steve, Danny]

[soera]

Title: An Excerpt From Got Your Back: A Study of Partnerships in Law Enforcement
Rating(s): PG
Character(s): Steve, Danny [friendship or pairing, you choose]
Summary: Check out the title. Also, the A/N.
Author's Notes: Inspired by this prompt. It's not quite an answer to the prompt - I think the prompter wanted to see the aftermath, and possibly

Comments

[shibela]

I really like the way you set this up. The outsider POV / interpretation of Steve's & Danny's interaction was priceless & even funnier for that last bit of Danny's & Steve's reactions upon reading the excerpt.

Thank you so much for sharing this! :)

[soera]

Thank you! It was particularly fun writing a textbook-y account of a typical Steve/Danny day. *grins* Glad you liked it!

[gyri]

Wheeeee!!! This was imaginative and fun! And perfect for them. :-D

[soera]

*laughs* Glad you liked it! And thanks for the review =D

[navyvet90]

Awesome! And the article sounded so real - well done!

[soera]

It was heaps of fun getting the tone of the article right. Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing! =D

[cmariad]

This is really good; I liked it

[soera]

First off - wow, thanks! I definitely wasn't expecting that much concrit, and the thought's much appreciated.

That said... I do know it's a fragment. It's not actually intended as a fully-fledged piece of writing; just as a tiny taste of what I'm hoping (but doubtful) will develop into a proper piece of fiction. The fault probably lies with my headers, which I now realise make it seem like this is intended as a complete piece of work. I've added an edit to the post to clarify the point, so thanks for inadvertently pointing that out to me

[shanachie_quill]

Very cool idea. It would be awesome to see more of this.

Welcome to the fandom!