Fic Post.

[snoopypez]

This is so beyond lame.

Title: that's the shape i found you in
Word count: 668
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Summary: When her head emerged from the water, she laughed as she swung her hair back, droplets arcing through air. “Come on, Veronica, who better to liven this place up than moi?”
Rating: pg?
Note: Written for the Worst Case Scenerio challenge. My

Comments

[passionflows]

Aww, I like this! It is totally the opposite of lame. I actually really like the ending, too. And the title.

[snoopypez]

::beams:: Thank you! Though you're totally wrong. ;)

Muhaha. I stole the title from a song. ;P

[sarah]

I love it. Very nice. It's funny and the ending is sad.

Why do I keep missing these challenges? I want to do one.

[fickledame]

I loved this! The last line was chilling. Thanks for sharing.

[fairy_tale_echo]

Why would you say this was lame? It was actually pretty lovely, I thought. You got a difficult situation but I think you used it really well here, it definitely worked to show us more about Lilly's character AND was a neat metaphor as well!

The passage of time between their meeting and Lilly's death, the way Lilly treated everything as an amusement, and Veronica's last realization about Lilly's mortality.

Very well done! So not lame! :) I really enjoyed it, thanks for writing it!!

[graypearl]

I followed the link here from slodwick's challenge, and I have to say that I really loved your story. Lilly faking accidents seems very in character, and it made the ending so much more vivid. I can't believe how well you worked the challenge in, since it all seems so natural that they would meet like that. Thanks for writing-- I really enjoyed it.