Serena (Sailor Cosmos) and the Immortal Sisters

[smsues]

Title: Cosmic Surprise and Crystal Senshi (The first chapter is a revised version of “The Beginning”. I ignored it.)
Writer: A. Lee
Summary:
1: “r/r Sailor Moon loses her power, or does she? sequel coming up soon”
2: ““This is a sequel to Cosmic Surprise. In Crystal Tokyo, the Scouts have quit (because they aren't needed), but a new evil

Comments

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“I am Chrys, spelled C-H-R-Y-S,” another girl with short silvery- white hair and silver eyes said. “That stands for Chrysalis, which I prefer being called. And if you make any jokes about it, you will be in big trouble. *ahem* LOL MARY-SUE, YOUR NAME SOUNDS ALMOST LIKE A TYPE OF CRACK!

I will teach you about how to use your psychic powers. You have the ability to teleport, use telepathy or telekinesis, or even throw or control different elements around in your natural form. I will teach you how.” Serena's part for this fic will be played by Kadabra, thank you and have a good night.

[kakeochi_umai]

Icon love! :D

[kahran042]

And, of course, we can't forget the most obvious joke:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chrysalis

[selene_moon]

When she is reborn, a burst of fire engulfs her, killing her,
That just made me laugh so hard. I think it would've made more sense to say that the fire kills her right before she's reborn.

WTFage, Part 1

[kakeochi_umai]

This fic had me wtfing so much that my comment wouldn't even fit. So here's the first part:

Hmmmmmmm. Serena and her loyal BFFs Crys, Chris, Chrys and Kris. Am I the only one who's thinking of the popular clique in a high school movie?

Plus, her eyes were silver and had a glint in them, intimidating almost all enemies who looked into them

Yep, sounds like a clique leader to me.

Serena: The Silver Crystal, a language crystal that allows the user to understand any language used by anything in the universe that Crys gives her after she learns 20 languages without any magical help

SERENA?! As in, the one who fails all her tests because she's too lazy to study? Does this Suethor even know how much work it takes to learn one language? Serena would go to one class, or open one teach-yourself book, then go "Ohhhhh, this is haaaaaaaard!!!! I'll go watch cartoons instead."

“a glaive much like Sailor Saturn’s”, a shield that protects her from minor magical attacks, and the Cosmic Blade. (“a blade slightly longer than Sailor Uranus’s Space

WTFage, Part 2

[kakeochi_umai]

And the rest.

Mina wore a beautiful golden-orange dress that showed modest cleavage

Lucky that my breasts are small and humble...

it spilled over her green shirt like water

What, and left it see-through?

Melvin had gotten rid of his bulky glasses, and now wore contacts. He had more muscles, as well, because he worked out more often.

Because God forbid any character should be a dork.

It reached just below her knees, and gave her a cozy look.

Amy the sofa.

The bottom part just lay there

Since the Suethor is obviously underage, I will not say what this makes me think of.

This was a gift from you-know-who.

Voldemort?

Chrysalis’s eyes communicated a message that said She discovered us, and we didn’t find anything.

No, no, no. Voldemort is a guy!

Her skirt was a combination of all the beautiful colors in the world. It mostly had silver, gold, and white, but rainbow streaks found their way here and there.

Am I the only one who's thinking "Fortune teller at a circus"?

Around her creamy neck

Chocolate bunny.

She wore