Title:
Cosmic Surprise and
Crystal Senshi (The first chapter is a revised version of “The Beginning”. I ignored it.)
Writer:
A. LeeSummary:
1: “r/r Sailor Moon loses her power, or does she? sequel coming up soon”
2: ““This is a sequel to Cosmic Surprise. In Crystal Tokyo, the Scouts have quit (because they aren't needed), but a new evil
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Hmmmmmmm. Serena and her loyal BFFs Crys, Chris, Chrys and Kris. Am I the only one who's thinking of the popular clique in a high school movie?
Plus, her eyes were silver and had a glint in them, intimidating almost all enemies who looked into them
Yep, sounds like a clique leader to me.
Serena: The Silver Crystal, a language crystal that allows the user to understand any language used by anything in the universe that Crys gives her after she learns 20 languages without any magical help
SERENA?! As in, the one who fails all her tests because she's too lazy to study? Does this Suethor even know how much work it takes to learn one language? Serena would go to one class, or open one teach-yourself book, then go "Ohhhhh, this is haaaaaaaard!!!! I'll go watch cartoons instead."
“a glaive much like Sailor Saturn’s”, a shield that protects her from minor magical attacks, and the Cosmic Blade. (“a blade slightly longer than Sailor Uranus’s Space Sword Blaster appeared
Now THAT's original! And the really funny thing is, since I haven't got up to the outers in canon yet, I probably wouldn't have been any the wiser about the copying if she hadn't called attention to it.
The Chrises are sisters.
Imagine their mum trying to call one of them! "Chris! No, not you, Chrys, your sister! No, no, not Kris! The other one! Green-haired Chris!!!"
Her costume went down to just below her knees, but gave her agility and speed.
Because having a skirt flapping around your calves will do that for you...
she looked like a true warrior
Yep, because a skirt flapping all over the place really says "warrior."
After the battle with Galaxia, she got her act together at school and is now getting As and Bs on her report card and rarely gets detention.
Lemme guess - she's not ditzy or klutzy or a crybaby anymore either. Way to kill my favourite character, Suethor.
“I will teach you everything that is not covered already, including etiquette
Sir Negamonster, would you care to be punished in the name of the Moon?
I will also be teaching you how to walk gracefully, despite your clumsiness, and how to play various instruments. Although some of those instruments won’t exist on the Earth, you are required to learn them anyways,”
Do these instruments have any actual baddie-killing powers, or do they just sound pretty? If it's the latter, then wouldn't it be better to save that until some time when there's not a pack of monsters rampaging the universe?
As for walking gracefully, I suppose if the monster is shitting itself laughing the senshi will be able to kill it while its guard is down...
“No,” chuckled Pluto. “I came to suggest something. Queen Serenity’s spirit asks if you want to visit the remains of the Moon Kingdom, and take extra lessons on special things and abilities that you possess.”
“And leave the Scouts here alone?” she asked, shocked. “No way!”
No, no, no, Suethor. The correct reply is "Extra lessons? No way. Uh-uh. It's hard enough at school!"
Hades won’t let me stay for long, so I have to leave.
Queen Serenity went to Hell? Ooooooooh, naughty! What did she do?
What’s strange is that we don’t have to transform to call on our powers
Um, correct me if I'm wrong, but I thought the whole point of transforming was so that the baddies wouldn't know their civilian identity and come after them while they're in the shower or something?
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