The Dance - Interlude: Water, Earth and Sky

[smiles_a_lot]

Rating: R, smex alert! 
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack were created by Annie Proulx. All laud and honour go to her.
Summary: This is an interlude that takes place on one of J & E's camping trips, a few years before The Package and The Dance. Hey! I miss Jack, too!

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[rosiet]

*****“The sky, Jack. It’s in your eyes.”

“Is it? Funny, that,” Jack gasped, eyes fluttering closed again.

“Why?”

“’Cause all I see is you,” Jack whispered*****

I know that's been quoted already, but hey, I lov-......liked it, so I'm quoting it again..... Em, this was lovely. A beautiful day, a beautiful sky, and our beautiful boys together....Awww....Oh yes Em, when you told us you would treat us you meant it!! And I was grinning from ear to ear reading this....

***Missy was somethin’ else, I tell you what, wild red hair and a temper to match.”****

Our own gorgeous, beautiful red head, immortalised as Ennis' sister....nad getting to spend lazy days, lying in the long grass with Ennis del Mar!!!! and just to make her heaven COMPLETE we have Jack describing her as ....
“Lively lil gal.” OH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for cheering up my morning.....and I liked the vein licking too.......hot damn!!!

Much love
Rosie
x

[smiles_a_lot]

Ah ha! I knew you would focus in on that vein lick. So many veins for licking, too! *drools* So glad you enjoyed this, Rosie dear. As for Missy, well she is a lively lil gal, isn't she? xx Em

OMG! I can't believe you did that!!!!

[mississaugared]

Em, you are incredible! I don't know what to say; I'm pretty much speechless and you KNOW that almost never happens, LOL!!

I'm laughing and crying at the same time here. For being immortalized in slash, as my evil twin called it :), and for the joy of the story itself.

The first time reading your original version I went from *DED* to weepy, anyway, because aside from being a hawt smexy interlude, you had me teary over "eyes" and "sky" and "love .. like". *sigh* I adore when they whipser pieces of their hearts to each other. You write it so damn well, too.

Thank you, dear, for giving me a darlin' new, smokin' hot, man loving brother! And that means Jack is practically my brother-in-law, whut? SWEET!!!!!What a gift, Em, truly, love you to bits!!

xxx E-talk (AKA Missy, ;) )

Re: OMG! I can't believe you did that!!!!

[smiles_a_lot]

OH YES I DID!!! Thank you for lending me your name, although I was very underhanded and sneaky about it. As I said in the EJ thread, I wanted Ennis to have a fierce protector with a gentle heart. I wanted him to have red and gold and there you were.
Now Missy, remember this is your BROTHER we're talking about. So no cameras in the bedroom please. Although a sneaky peek at the brother-in-law with his shirt off, washing up at the outside pump after a long hard day in the fields, might be allowed. *Evil Grin* xx Em

[joycedavenport]

Hot and sweet just the way I like it. Keeping up with this story and really enjoying it.

[smiles_a_lot]

I'm so glad this item on the menu met your approval. Anyone for seconds? - Em

[lalaynia]

That's the kind of day to remember.

Very nice to wake up to.

-Joan

[smiles_a_lot]

Hey there Joan - Oh yes. Waking up, at bedtime, for afternoon nap, these boys are great any time. Thanks. xx Em

[samtyr]

Ennis felt the water lap around him gently as he soaked up this moment, filling his glass from half empty to all the way full.

---Ooooh yeah! ::happy sigh:: Such a wonderful moment. Thank you for sharing. :)

[smiles_a_lot]

*Happy sigh* I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Life is so worth it when its filled with moments like that. - Em