The Dance - Interlude: Water, Earth and Sky

[smiles_a_lot]

Rating: R, smex alert! 
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack were created by Annie Proulx. All laud and honour go to her.
Summary: This is an interlude that takes place on one of J & E's camping trips, a few years before The Package and The Dance. Hey! I miss Jack, too!

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Comments

[smiles_a_lot]

Tee hee. Let's see, hmmm, quite a few in our group have made it in this fic. I wonder where my favourite Scottish sister will fit in here? Hmmm. Any suggestions? xx Em

[fridayblues]

Oh, I like this very much!
I like it when Ennis saw the sky in Jack's eyes while Jack saw anything but Ennis. And did Jack almost tell Ennis he loved him? *beam*
This is such a nice read and don't tell my boss because I read it in the office as well. LOL

[smiles_a_lot]

Howdy! I think you're right, maybe Jack did almost let something slip there. How can he not? Ennis is just so gosh-darn cute, he can make anyone's insides go to mush. I won't tell your boss if you won't tell my boss. Everyone thinks "Oh, that Em. She just loves to do laundry, all the time she spends in there!!" Thanks so much for taking time out of your busy writing schedule, and vacation, to drop me a line. - Em

[ankara28]

Hello Em,
A lovely Interlude. It's so sweet when both are so relaxed and Ennis talks of his childhood with his sister. Jack loves to listen to him, probably, because he grew up so alone.
Thank this was worth staying up for.
Hugs
ankara

[smiles_a_lot]

Great to hear from you, Ankara. Oh you stayed up, did you? So did I! lol. I hope you had lovely sweet dreams of fluffy clouds and hot hot sun and two very steamy (and wet) men. xx Em

[sienata]

That was SOOOOOOO very nice. I love... errr... LIKE it when they are all happy and peaceful, making love and talking and watching the clouds and sniffing the smells of nature and themselves. This is a very nice interlude. Thank you very much!! S!

[smiles_a_lot]

Oh thank you! I do so love ...ahem...LIKE all the comments you leave me. Well everyone knows the best thing to do on a hot summer day is sex au naturel. Too bad their camping gear didn't allow for a little mini freezer so they can have ice cream sex when they head back to the tent. Guess ice cream sex has to be written by someone. *HINT! HINT!*

[sienata]

As a matter of fact, I was looking at my LLBean catalogue, at the sleeping bags and camping gear, and there was a cute little ball thingy that made ice cream.... hmmmmmmmm! S!

[smiles_a_lot]

HMMMMM indeed. A nice addition to the FISHING gear, don't you think? xx Em!

ps. I've printed off Fishing today, btw, and am starting it tonite. Squee!

[sweetje]

There was surely peace in their little part of the world for this brief time. It's nice to see Jack and Ennis just being together. Oh, and that little frolic in the water was invigerating, not only for them, but also for me. ;)
I enjoyed this. :)

Debra

[smiles_a_lot]

Hey there Debra: I like that word you used, "frolic". I think I'll have to use that word the next time the boys want another interlude. I'm glad you found this interlude invigorating. See? Reading slash has health benefits, too! - Em