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smiles_a_lot

The Dance - Interlude: Water, Earth and Sky

Aug 10, 2007 00:51

Rating: R, smex alert!
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack were created by Annie Proulx. All laud and honour go to her.
Summary: This is an interlude that takes place on one of J & E's camping trips, a few years before The Package and The Dance. Hey! I miss Jack, too!

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smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 20:12:40 UTC

Hey Kathy - I'm glad you liked this. Thanks. - Em

jospree August 10 2007, 18:54:02 UTC

I loved this, thank you!

smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 20:13:26 UTC

Love your icon! You're very welcome. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. - Em

So lovely, peaceful, and beautiful jennydcf August 10 2007, 20:30:44 UTC

It's a pleasure to read your work; everyone's quoted my favorite lines, but the metaphor here is wonderful, too: Ennis had to swallow the lump lodged in his throat. He felt his edges begin to unfurl, opening slowly to the warmth in Jack’s eyes.

I really look forward to your posts; could I ask you to friend me so that they'll come up on my friendslist when you post? As I'm just a reader there's nothing on mine, but I'll friend you anyhow.:-)

Jenny

Re: So lovely, peaceful, and beautiful smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 20:16:01 UTC

Hey there Jenny:

I really enjoy your comments. You've always been so supportive...I am very happy to friend you! Next post should be some time this week. xx Em

bbmjack324 August 11 2007, 13:23:11 UTC

The blue eyes, the sky, the smells, the clouds--lovely images. Just like these:

They reached the shallows and began to walk towards shore, Ennis purposefully walking behind Jack. His eyes feasted on the muscles that rippled like waves and flowed down to the curve of Jack’s ass.....“Inside me, Ennis. Now.”

smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 20:24:00 UTC

Ahh yes. The wonder of Jack's back, my words can't even do it justice. However, I'm glad you appreciate the effort. Don't you love it when Jack gets all forceful and tells Ennis what he wants? *sigh* Thanks. - Em

poppyhoney_67 August 13 2007, 14:45:20 UTC

See how determined I am to reply to this interlude, even after all this time! lol Thats what your writing does to me - makes me want to hang for dear life and never give up.

I love this little interlude, Em, it really is quite gorgeous. And sexy and hawt. And the title is lovely too. All those elements meshed together whilst Ennis and Jack are expressing their love for each other on their mountain....bliss. I love how Jack talks but hearing Ennis talk here was just as gorgeous. Being carried away by a far away memory of him and his sister (horray for Missy!) in the long grass in summer, and now he has a new memory to ponder on and treasure. *sigh*

Thanks for giving us this sweet little fix whilst we wait for The Dance to update (no pressure AT ALL).

smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 20:27:52 UTC

Oh my honey. So persistent, despite extreme adversity and exhaustion! I didn't want to come out and say it, but I guess this interlude is my homage to the BBM Tag line, "Love is a Force of Nature." The elements all come together and bless this moment of peace and tranquility, a time of simplicity and *almost* innocence. As for The Dance update, I'm working on it, I'm working on it. *grumbles*. You really are a greedy little minx, considering you get it days before everyone else! lol. Welcome back. xx Em