Comments | slybrunette: the post script plurality {sheldon/penny}

slybrunette

the post script plurality {sheldon/penny}

Aug 26, 2009 11:12

Title: The Post Script Plurality
Fandom: The Big Bang Theory
Characters/Pairings: Sheldon/Penny.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,902
Prompt: #42 - Months for 100_tales
Author's Note: I played fast and loose with the timeline. Forgive me.
Summary: Post S2 finale. There's a note on the bed. Three months of coffee deprivation, missing socks, and broken laptops ( Read more... )

table: 100_tales, character: tbbt: penny, ship: tbbt: sheldon/penny, fandom: the big bang theory, !fic, character: tbbt: sheldon

Comments 52

kalishaka August 26 2009, 19:39:29 UTC

This was absolutely adorable and an utter treat to read. I have a soft spot for 'Sheldon returns' fic. Just because they tend to build upon everything I love about their friendship.

slybrunette August 27 2009, 02:03:47 UTC

I am particularly interested in post S2 fics as well -- I don't know why I have an attachment to that scenario.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

ruby_caspar August 26 2009, 19:56:57 UTC

This was so sweet, and so believable. It was fantastic - I loved it!

slybrunette August 27 2009, 02:04:39 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you thought so :)

bemoan1000 August 26 2009, 20:03:52 UTC

I like how she writes notes, on the note he wrote.

slybrunette August 27 2009, 02:05:08 UTC

It was just a little idea that popped into my head; glad it worked for you :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

renisanz August 26 2009, 20:25:37 UTC

Loved the affection here.

She has to bite her lip to keep from laughing. Maybe even to keep from kissing him and showing him what that word can really mean (it will take a bit longer to own up to that).

Hee. Sometimes hugs are so much better, like in this case. :)

slybrunette August 27 2009, 02:06:08 UTC

Yeah, I definitely wanted to stick with the hugs. Going any farther felt too much like pushing it.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

artincircles August 26 2009, 22:19:07 UTC

God, you use metaphors and imagery so incredibly well and your pauses are placed so beautifully. How do you do that? I am terrified of writing prose because of that! So I settle for word trees :) This is what fan fiction should be all about; about taking these characters to unknown territories and let them be. I love how you used the rain, as if the weather was in tune with her feelings. Perfect ( ... )

slybrunette August 27 2009, 02:18:22 UTC

I love your reviews. For reasons other than the flattery, namely that you let me know what I'm doing right. You deconstruct and let me know what works, and I appreciate that more than anything at this point.

The laptop line was on purpose, and I did have every intention of writing it so that people might read into it. You did. Thank you. It's all about atmosphere, small details, with these things.

I'm so very glad that you liked this! Thanks for leaving me such thorough reviews and thank you for reading :)