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[slybrunette]

Title: And I Swerve Out Of Control
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sayid/Juliet
Word Count: 527
Rating: R
Prompt: #15 - This Is My Desperation In Action
Summary: Spoilers for Season 4. He's come so far since his days on the island. Too bad it happens to be in the wrong direction.

He’s come so far since his days on the island.

Too bad it happens to be

Comments

[livefortonight]

I love the way you wrote this. Short sentences and small parts that say so much. Very good! (And I love that icon. So true, haha! =D)

[slybrunette]

Thank you! I'm really into this style, atm.

And yeah, the icon is way true. I saw it and had to have it.

I'm glad you liked this!

[livefortonight]

I'm going to have to go back and read some more of your fic, I don't think I've read anything by you before!

[slybrunette]

Well I have a ton, I'm not ashamed to say. Just look under the fic tag :)

[slybrunette]

Aw, you read it! Thank you so much, you totally just made my day :D

And I am just full of ideas lately, aren't i? lol. Sometimes I wonder if that's a bad sign mentally.

Again, thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

[halfdutch]

Ooh, my day is crazy but I had to stop and read this! :)

I really like this, how neither one of them understand themselves or the other or maybe why they end up where they do, especially with each other. It's like no one else can ever understand what they went through and even if they never speak about it, there's a kind of comfort in that.

And yay for more of this pairing!

[slybrunette]

Aw, that means a lot that you did stop to read :)

These people, off island, seem very confused, all having identity crisises, and full of guilt and battle scars. And I like the kind of relationships that could result from that.

I saw both of your S/J fics, and will be reviewing as soon as I get done nomming shit over at lost_fic_awards

Thanks again! I'm glad you liked this!

[cleuchi]

Wow. Really good job. I loved the way they seem so disconnected, your short-sentences style and the little parts in which you divided the fic.
*iz in love with your icon too*

[slybrunette]

I wanted to make them sound disconnected -- as well as the story.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

(And I love the icon too :))

[enamors]

Another winner. This is a great character portrait, it's very powerful and shows Sayid in a new light I think. Two thumbs up. :)

Oh, and allow me one fangirl moment: Juliet and Sayid! *squee*

[slybrunette]

You're a Sayid/Juliet fan too? Woot!

I'm glad you liked this hun! Thanks so much for reading!