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[slybrunette]

Title: And I Swerve Out Of Control
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sayid/Juliet
Word Count: 527
Rating: R
Prompt: #15 - This Is My Desperation In Action
Summary: Spoilers for Season 4. He's come so far since his days on the island. Too bad it happens to be in the wrong direction.

He’s come so far since his days on the island.

Too bad it happens to be

Comments

[_chica02]

More Sayid/Juliet, yay! Your icon is so true. ;P

I don't even know what to say about this. Its that good. Perfect, really. *fails at feedback*

Awesome job, I hope you write some more of this pair.

[slybrunette]

I never knew there was any until after I wrote it, lol, now I'm finding all the goodies.

And hey, any feedback is awesome feedback, so thank you!

I do plan on writing more of them. It's an intriguing pairing.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[failoh]

Okay, so honestly, I first read this out of a whole , "Hey, somebody else wrote them too!" after I posted my story, but wow...

Wow. Your writing is fantastic. I love how Sayid is trying to convince himself he doesn't care, but in the end, he winds up right where all the other Oceanic 6 are. I also love how Juliet goes and finds him, and this line:

"He'd always thought she had her sights set on Jack; turns out it doesn't much matter when you're lonely. Still lost."

So beautiful and so good. I can't wait to read more of your stories- and hopefully, more Sayid/ Juliet!

[slybrunette]

All of a sudden this ship is being common, it amuses me. Two weeks ago there was like nothing.

I'm really glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[failoh]

Yeah, I have to admit, I'm a new fan and I only got the idea from the last episode, but I like both of the characters, and I like this pairing a lot- it somehow makes sense.

And you're welcome!

[elliotsmelliot]

The idea that Sayid would not want to go back at first struck me as odd because in many ways I think of him as noble. However, there is a also a part of him that is very hard and independent and resentful of the ways his nobility has been used by others. I see Juliet having these qualities too so it makes sense for them to lose themselves in each other. The more I think about it I like Juliet best matched with Sayid. Great work!

[slybrunette]

He is very noble but everyone has their limits. He's just as imperfect as the rest of them.

I'm kind of in love with Juliet/Sayid, more so than her with anyone else. In some weird, twisted way something about it makes sense in my head. I don't know why.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[slybrunette]

I like the ending the best too, so I'm glad you seemed to agree.

This was a very hard thing to write because I'm so unused to Sayid and his POV, especially with Sayid/Juliet being the pairing in this, so I'm thrilled to hear you thought it had some emotional resonance.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reviewing!

[mrslinus17]

I really like this, though I don't exactly like these two together. Your a really great writer.

[slybrunette]

Thanks hun! That really means a ton to me, considering I know it takes me a LOT to read fic with a pairing I don't like.

I'm glad you like this! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!