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Feb 09, 2008 17:28

Title: Second Place Ain't So Great
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sawyer/Juliet
Word Count: 383
Rating: R
Prompt: 6 - Truth for 
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ship: lost: sawyer/juliet, table: 12_stories, character: lost: sawyer, fandom: lost, character: lost: juliet, !fic

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slybrunette February 10 2008, 02:52:42 UTC
She's a bitch...but god I love her.

Sawyer -- he's very different, very back and forth since those cages to me. I didn't like him at all in Season Three, now I'm just starting to like him again, but there is this period of time where he just seemed very off. Maybe that's connected to what we saw in that scene.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

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bebitched February 10 2008, 02:34:03 UTC
This is very in character for Juliet, matter-of-fact and collected. And the title fits perfectly. They're both the others, no pun intended, the second servings. Is it possible for something to have two third wheels?

Great job!

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slybrunette February 10 2008, 02:56:54 UTC
The title wasn't even thought out. It was just...there. I'm not happy with it, but I guess when you look at it that way it's not bad.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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michellek February 10 2008, 06:17:49 UTC
This is perfect. I love the style of it, and just everything about it, really.

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slybrunette February 10 2008, 18:36:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the style, I'm kind of a bit in love with the short, choppy sentences myself.

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aboutbunnies February 10 2008, 17:17:00 UTC
Wow. Just, wow.

This is so in character for both Juliet and Sawyer. Haunting.

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slybrunette February 11 2008, 03:00:49 UTC
I'm glad you think so, it was my first try with this ship :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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cleuchi February 12 2008, 23:21:19 UTC
I'm in totally love with this fic. So short and involving so many things. I'm speechless actually. But I'll adore this sentence for the rest of my days: There’s a “fuck you” in there somewhere that she doesn’t answer.
Why do I see now Juliet with everyone except with Jack? x3

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slybrunette February 13 2008, 19:30:24 UTC
Aw, thanks! And probably because you just read my Juliet/Sayid and Juliet/Sawyer fic back to back, lol.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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