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[slybrunette]

Title: Second Place Ain't So Great
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sawyer/Juliet
Word Count: 383
Rating: R
Prompt: 6 - Truth for 

Comments

[ex_lone_lil]

Perfect.

[slybrunette]

You know, as I was writing this, I remembered I still owe you Sawyer/Juliet. So that's in the works. Maybe this will tide you over.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[ex_lone_lil]

Hahah. I wasn't expecting there to be another one too! *glees*

This definitely worked. I love the fluid, effortless way you delve into characterization without being long-winded or too adjective-y. :)

[slybrunette]

Well I just picked up part of a claim for it, so I kind of have to in order to fufill the claim. Plus I will get around to finishing all the prompts soon. I think I've got half of them left.

I was trying out short and choppy for once. I go back and forth with my style these days.

Again, thanks!

[elliotsmelliot]

I just loved this. Juliet's power of observation surpasses even that of Sawyer's. She knows his weak spots because they are remarkably similar to hers. The image of Kate and Jack flying away was really well done.

“I could’ve told you it was just a matter of time.”

I love how this could be applied to so many things.

[slybrunette]

Juliet is...she's very smart, very observant. I like to play on that. And her and Sawyer are a bit similar, oddly enough.

That does have a couple of meanings, you're definitely right on that.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[bachlava]

OMG, perfect hardened!Juliet and Sawyer! Loved it, loved it, loved it.

[slybrunette]

Hee, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

[meagan4dominic]

I think that the angst in this was just fantastic & I've never really considered this pairing before but this fic is exactly how I could imagine something between them happening - very well written

[slybrunette]

I've kind of loved the idea of them since "One Of Us" and I figured why not write them.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[gottalovev]

I really love what you did here with the style. you say so much in few words. as in:

She kisses him, just like she did Jack, no fanfare, just lips (and teeth here).

it's just perfect for us to feel the way they relate, what they actually long for. awesome.

[slybrunette]

I did choppy awhile back with Jack/Kate fic and that got positive reviews so I did it again. Well the style anyways.

I like to relate back to things we see on the show. It always helps me when I read.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!