fic rec: Midnight Land

[slashxmistress]

From the number of comments, it looks like hardly anyone is reading these. How is that even possible? You guys- this series is AWESOME.

It's the most gorgeous vampire au I have read, NOT 16 Candles verse. It's dark and kind of achey, but also very sexy and somehow uplifting :)

Midnight Land

The Art of Breathing Underwater

Away From The Sun

Won

Comments

[captfine]

Are we allowed to critique and give pointers, or are we just supposed to comment that we've read and like it? XD

I think that one of the problems is, though I've only glanced over it, is that she has a lot of dialogue. Like, too much dialogue and not enough ~action in a way.

[slashxmistress]

Well sure, I think you can critque as long as you're nice about it :)

I like heavy dialogue pieces, when the dialogue is good. I think it's meant to be more of a cerebral piece than an "action" story.

I know what you mean though, kind of the "show don't tell" rule?

Her style works for me, but it might not for everyone.

[captfine]

http://community.livejournal.com/nur_luegen/2112.html?thread=7744#t7744 That's nice isn't it?

Hah, I don't. Well, I do depending on the situation, but I'm also big on seeing peoples thoughts and knowing what they're doing. Though that all is mentioned in my comment *lol*

[slashxmistress]

Yes- that's very nice -
and point well taken ♥

[chainer_morgana]

Right now I've no time to read it but I'm bookmarking it and I will soon :) thanks for the rec!